"Carnivore" was very good, although I was tempted not to read it because of the name. Sigh. Actually, I personally think it's your best yet. The rhyming at the end made it that much more satisfying to read.
"Sow" is decent. Pretty close to the first etc. You've written better.
Personally, I like this FFFVAL style. It frees up your mind to think. Who said you *had* to write with rules anyway?
peace,
-nick
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