That was pretty horrible.
"We will burn down all the corrupt governments, who'd sell out their own people for a dime
We will destroy all hate and anger"
Isn't this stupidly contradictionary too? I mean, you wanna destroy hate and anger by taking over the world and destroying all governments?
Is this serious or are you trying to pull our legs?
If a song preaches the removal of hate and anger or something, then it shouldn't do so by seeming angry and hateful if you get my drift. Your friend should figure out what it's gonna be, is it a song about peace and love or is it a song about stickin' it to the man? Then he should write it accordingly. Also, the language is not poetic.
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