not too shabby... you have a concept that not everyone sings about... it's short and to the point. What you're lacking is a KAPOWW! factor. It isn't totally neccessary since it's a song...BUT if you have one...well you could go from "meh" to "wow" with just a few lines.
I don't have any specific suggestions for you. Sit down and think about exactly what this song means. Then think about all the words that go with that concept. Find a combination of those words that just pops out at you...and wallah! you are on your way.
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"Not remotely! Because iocaine comes from Australia, as everyone knows. And Australia is entirely peopled with criminals. And criminals are used to having people not trust them as you are not trusted by me, so I can clearly not choose the wine in front of you."
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