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Originally Posted by AwwSugar
I like the style you used, but I'm not sure I like the poem itself.
It's a little bit corny.
But overall, I do like it.
What was the inspiration for this?
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Yes, I have to agree with you on the 'corny'. A few bits and pieces of it are indeed corny.
One of my close friends passed away but when I was writing the lyrics I threw in a few verses that more people could relate to as if someone broke up with another. Like this verse:
'So long,
you don't belong.
You walked out,
nobody knows about.'
That one could relate to a relationship or a death of a close loved one.
I'm not sure.
Thank you for the honestly.