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Old 01-23-2010, 11:19 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Most of it is pretty good, but here are a few parts like "Purpling Jellybean" that sound cool on paper but would probably be hard for a singer to sing without getting all jumbled up. I don't know if you're a singer. For all I know, you could be a drummer. Overall, it's pretty good, but it would be better if you could turn up the heat.
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