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Old 01-27-2010, 02:56 AM   #7 (permalink)
gogojessicat
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really liked prechorus1. i think your chorus could use a little work.. what if you switched the order so it was like a canon firing at the sun, how it hurts to carry on and on? dunno if that helps any. just an idea
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