That last one was pretty cool. I think that old people in relationships are a vastly underused subject. There's so much depth in the possibility of lovers drifting away and yet the only times it's ever discussed is with teenage breakup songs.
On the other hand, these people really seem to be a little bit more than "drifting away"...
The line "Kamikaze death calls" is in my opinion the weakest line in the piece, but overall it's very strong. That one line just seemed a little bit too far overboard.
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I know all those girls you been messin around with i dont want your STD's. So boy quit with your chat i dont wanna talk about my cat, i dont wanna see your face, now leave.
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