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Originally Posted by dedicated
hey all, sorry it took me this long to back to you guys. I haven't been on for a while.
Since then I've made some modifications to the lyrics. They're fixed below. Also I've written music. Is there a way I could put an audio file on here of the music?
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Do you have 15 posts???
If you do, you can put a link. But, if this is the only thing you do on this site, you might get accused of advertising and get b&.
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Originally Posted by dedicated
[Slow, quiet guitar intro]
I know you're scared
Cause you can't bear
The pain of being who you are
Well heres what I say
See it my way
It could be worse, be glad you're not me
[explosion of guitars, music gets fast]
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If I make a new band sometime soon, "Explosion of Guitars" is going to be a consideration for their name. Especially if it's got no guitars. That would be cool.
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Originally Posted by dedicated
You could be me
Dumped in a world full of jumbled colors
Then you'll see
Whats real is bad, whats good is dream
Please don't come inside
I'll infect you
It won't be your fault
This mess is spreading like a fire, theres nothing you can do
You could be me
Screaming at the world, but you're never heard
Then you'll see
You were put on this earth to fight this fight alone
Please don't come inside
I'll infect you
It won't be your fault
The plague is coming for you all, there's nothing you can do
You could be me
Threatened by nothing and fading fast
Then you'll see
You've gotta give up, there's no point if you win
Please don't come inside
I'll infect you
It won't be your fault
The fires burning through heart, theres nothing you can do
It's been coming from the start, theres nothing you can do
Prepare your soul to be torn apart, theres nothing you can do
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lol there are so many new users posting on your thread...
I think that this has it's good points and it's bad points. The good points are the concept, and the originality. Lots of people think this, I think everybody, but nobody says it, at least no songs I can think of off the top of my head. The bad points are probably that it's got not enough detail. I think that this is probably my number one pork with modern poetry. I don't know anything about this person except that they are full of self pity. It's not the end of the world, and I don't think it's big enough to warrant an edit, but it's something to think about.