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11-22-2009, 09:44 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Pennsylvania
Posts: 18
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my first song post
The genre of the music I write is 80s rock. Hair metal, heavy metal, etc. Just so you know.
Here is what it will be like once I start writing the music to it. [Slow, quiet guitar intro] I know you're scared Cause you can't bear The pain of being who you are Well heres what I say See it my way It could be worse, be glad you're not me [explosion of guitars, music gets fast] You could be me Lost in a world full of jumbled colors Then you'll see Whats real is bad, whats good is dream Please don't come inside I'll infect you It won't be your fault Its spreading like a wildfire, theres nothing you can do [interlude] You could be me Screaming at the world, but you're never heard Then you'll see You were put on this earth to fight this fight alone Please don't come inside I'll infect you It won't be your fault This mess is spreading like a fire, theres nothing you can do |
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12-30-2009, 11:52 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Dec 2009
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Hello.
According to me, This is best Lyrics because each word has own meaning and I like so much this type of song. I like sad song and This is my one of the favourite. Thanks for posting.
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02-19-2010, 07:31 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Pennsylvania
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hey all, sorry it took me this long to back to you guys. I haven't been on for a while.
Since then I've made some modifications to the lyrics. They're fixed below. Also I've written music. Is there a way I could put an audio file on here of the music? [Slow, quiet guitar intro] I know you're scared Cause you can't bear The pain of being who you are Well heres what I say See it my way It could be worse, be glad you're not me [explosion of guitars, music gets fast] You could be me Dumped in a world full of jumbled colors Then you'll see Whats real is bad, whats good is dream Please don't come inside I'll infect you It won't be your fault This mess is spreading like a fire, theres nothing you can do You could be me Screaming at the world, but you're never heard Then you'll see You were put on this earth to fight this fight alone Please don't come inside I'll infect you It won't be your fault The plague is coming for you all, there's nothing you can do You could be me Threatened by nothing and fading fast Then you'll see You've gotta give up, there's no point if you win Please don't come inside I'll infect you It won't be your fault The fires burning through heart, theres nothing you can do It's been coming from the start, theres nothing you can do Prepare your soul to be torn apart, theres nothing you can do |
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02-19-2010, 09:08 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: In the moment
Posts: 102
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If you do, you can put a link. But, if this is the only thing you do on this site, you might get accused of advertising and get b&. Quote:
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I think that this has it's good points and it's bad points. The good points are the concept, and the originality. Lots of people think this, I think everybody, but nobody says it, at least no songs I can think of off the top of my head. The bad points are probably that it's got not enough detail. I think that this is probably my number one pork with modern poetry. I don't know anything about this person except that they are full of self pity. It's not the end of the world, and I don't think it's big enough to warrant an edit, but it's something to think about.
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