Yeh, I wouldn't say it's exactly original/creative stuff but it's not badly written. This could easily fit in with a lot of stuff that's on the radio..
t3hplatyz0rz makes a valid point, but I do know how you feel.. Initially I sort of restrained from writing songs despite wanting to try it out - because I thought what I would write sounded so corny and cringe-worthy. I've still only written several songs, but I'm a lot more confident with it, and post them on here in hope of getting constructive feedback to improve. Another thing that I find helps is really listening and dissecting lyrics of songs you like.. it gives you a good sense of how others structure a story/message and different techniques to communicate it.
Last edited by primo; 02-21-2010 at 12:32 AM.
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