Song Critique Plx? "Oh, Karma"
Harmer, harmer
you know this isn't me
Armor, armor
a shell, because of she
Farther, farther
away till you can't see
Karma, karma
what more am I to be?
Bitterness, better this
When my punishment undeserved,
Bitter this, betterness
I hope for change, absurd.
Betterness, bitter bliss
Only when alone,
Bitterness, better bliss
do I dread the come home.
Blame me, blame me
for reasons unknown
To see, to see
the pain to me you've shown
Feeling, feelings
disregarding my own
Karma, karma
rules apply to them alone
Bitterness, better this
When my punishment undeserved,
Bitter this, betterness
I hope for change, absurd
Betterness, bitter bliss
Only when alone,
Bitterness, better bliss
do I dread the come home.
Concerned, concerned
when our tears shed
Unheard, unheard
my cries of help have been
My word, my word
and support I gave when
Oh karma, karma
where the hell were you then?
Bitterness, better this
When my punishment undeserved,
Withered this, betterness
my hopes, like fire, burned.
Betterness, withered is
And once again, I'm alone.
Bitterness, bitterness
Oh karma, to me your face was never shown.
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