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Old 03-30-2010, 12:39 PM   #191 (permalink)
VEGANGELICA
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Originally Posted by AwwSugar View Post
Yayy for lyrics!
I love love love the song.
And these are my two favourite parts:

This part had the strongest emotional appeal:

This part was cute and I like the play on words:
I'm glad you liked "Evergreen," AwwSugar! I thought you'd think the play on words was just silly rather than cute...maybe you are being charitable ...but I'm happy you thought it was cute.

I also liked the lines about trying to let go graciously of expectations. IT ISN'T EASY TO DO, IS IT!!!!!!! Those lines probably summarize my whole point of the song: being able to let go and move on even when it is hard to. I was hoping that you'd at least like the overall meaning of the song. Plus, the person being sung to is gender-neutral. I wanted to be sure of that! And I tried to avoid rhyming absolutely everything.

Of course, if you had despised the lyrics that would be okay, because I think you'd still know that I had the intention of trying to make something you'd like...and you'd appreciate that. I've always liked your honesty and constructive criticism...you aren't afraid to say what you really feel about music...and I never take your criticism personally.

<3 and =@

EDIT: I see you are still using "favourite." If we ever get you back from across the ocean, you'll be using this for life, I think!
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