Originally Posted by Dylanist

^ Iraq war? I like the feel of that song, but I can't help but feel it's been covered a lot. And since it's a very simple structure, it doesn't stand out too much. The imagery is very simplistic, as is the vocabulary. This is great for getting feelings, emotions, and messages across, but it sacrafices the factor that makes poerty timeless: craft. Of course, I haven't heard the song sung. That's an entirely new element because the composition itself can carry that arty weight (or vice versa).

A little more development in that department and these are good to go. I enjoyed reading, thanks for posting and keep it up.