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right-track · 07-13-2005, 03:34 PM

I don't understand how you can write something like this and then ask for name suggestions! I like the chorus and it looks more like a song now.

You say you want to help me,
But it's not what I need,
You say you want to make things better,
But you aren't who I need...

Ever think of swapping the 2nd and 4th line around i.e;

You say you want to help me,
But you are'nt who I need,
You say you want to make things better,
But it's not what I need...

Inferring what you need is another drink (just athought).
As for the song title, call it whatever you want, but if I'd written it (and I wish I had) then it would be called - 'What I Need'.
Top lyrics, Repeats!

07-13-2005, 03:34 PM	#8 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	I don't understand how you can write something like this and then ask for name suggestions! I like the chorus and it looks more like a song now. You say you want to help me, But it's not what I need, You say you want to make things better, But you aren't who I need... Ever think of swapping the 2nd and 4th line around i.e; You say you want to help me, But you are'nt who I need, You say you want to make things better, But it's not what I need... Inferring what you need is another drink (just athought). As for the song title, call it whatever you want, but if I'd written it (and I wish I had) then it would be called - 'What I Need'. Top lyrics, Repeats!