I like that a lot better, thanks. See...this is kind of why I post my stuff...so people can make suggestions on how to make things sound better, when they don't sound completely right to me. It's also nice to know what others think to give me more confidence...
I like the idea of having it called 'What I Need', I also thought about 'Control' (as a bit of a contradiction) but I'm not sure?
Thankyou for your comments, they are much appreciated.
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I never wanted to love you, but that's okay...
I always knew that you'd leave me anyway.
You're treading on awfully thin ice darling,
it's so awfully thin.
It's almost turning to water,
as
we
speak.
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