I read your lyrics and liked the first verse, but as you say yourself, there are so many songs exploring this theme, it`s difficult to come up with a new take on it.
As it`s a song about being vulnerable, I was surprised to read that
"windscreen`s stronger than ever before", which seems to give the reverse impression.
Also, verse two seems to start with a string of instructions to your partner, which might alienate your male listeners ! Sorry, that`s a pretty facetious remark, but it might be true. Maybe you could check it out with someone you trust ?
I liked the bridge and have only just noticed the way weather imagery pops up in different parts of the song. That`s clever !
Well, thanks for sharing - I enjoyed looking at your lyrics and I hope you find a theme that you`re more comfortable with yourself.
Good luck!
