Please rate my song "Honey"

toosik · 10-24-2025, 01:13 PM

Hi all
I wrote this song years ago during a difficult time for my wife. Her pain really hurt me too, and I found writing it down really helped me at the time. Now AI is a thing so I have put the lyrics into a generator and used prompts to create the song the way I envisaged it. I think it came out perfectly.

I'm asking 2 favours from you...
Please let me know what you think of the song.
Any insight from any ladies as to whether I should send the song to my wife would be really appreciated. Half of me thinks she would love it and the other half thinks she will take it as me calling her weak and in need of saving (which she is neither).

Thankyou

https://on.soundcloud.com/TuVxovkFvl8k9xETea

toosik · 10-30-2025, 05:02 PM

Any insight on "Honey", or any opinions on how you like it as a song would really be so appreciated. Please let me know

toosik · 11-20-2025, 03:38 PM

Listen to Songs for Kim, a playlist by James Kennedy on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/rWC6Y3iMHFEzQ9hxbw

toosik · 11-21-2025, 01:48 PM

Thanks. There's 11 songs I've written recently on that Songs for Kim album. A mix of commercial pop songs like Honey and also nu-metal and some hair rock ballads. I'm really proud of the writing on there. Considering I started as an MC, and doing battles etc, I've loved the process of writing actual songs. And figuring out how you have to write differently for different genres.

I've had probably 1500 hits on the song writing page and a few hundred here and you're the first person who's actually responded so genuinely, thank you

10-24-2025, 01:13 PM	#1 (permalink)
toosik Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: UK Posts: 107	Please rate my song "Honey" Hi all I wrote this song years ago during a difficult time for my wife. Her pain really hurt me too, and I found writing it down really helped me at the time. Now AI is a thing so I have put the lyrics into a generator and used prompts to create the song the way I envisaged it. I think it came out perfectly. I'm asking 2 favours from you... Please let me know what you think of the song. Any insight from any ladies as to whether I should send the song to my wife would be really appreciated. Half of me thinks she would love it and the other half thinks she will take it as me calling her weak and in need of saving (which she is neither). Thankyou https://on.soundcloud.com/TuVxovkFvl8k9xETea

10-30-2025, 05:02 PM	#2 (permalink)
toosik Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: UK Posts: 107	Any insight on "Honey", or any opinions on how you like it as a song would really be so appreciated. Please let me know

11-20-2025, 03:38 PM	#3 (permalink)
toosik Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: UK Posts: 107	Listen to Songs for Kim, a playlist by James Kennedy on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/rWC6Y3iMHFEzQ9hxbw

11-21-2025, 01:48 PM	#4 (permalink)
toosik Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: UK Posts: 107	Thanks. There's 11 songs I've written recently on that Songs for Kim album. A mix of commercial pop songs like Honey and also nu-metal and some hair rock ballads. I'm really proud of the writing on there. Considering I started as an MC, and doing battles etc, I've loved the process of writing actual songs. And figuring out how you have to write differently for different genres. I've had probably 1500 hits on the song writing page and a few hundred here and you're the first person who's actually responded so genuinely, thank you