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sleepy jack 02-09-2008 05:16 PM

Y0 I made a new song
 
Give me your thoughts.

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jackhammer 02-09-2008 05:37 PM

I wish I had this much talent at your age. Keep it up. I'm glad you are branching out musically and making music that you want to hear, not what you think other people should hear.

sleepy jack 02-09-2008 05:54 PM

I'm going to fix this and add a layer of several kind of sounding like they're being played far away distorted guitars and I'm also going to re-do the drums so for now tell me how you feel about the piano..

right-track 02-09-2008 05:56 PM

Piano's fine, but lose the drums completely.

ProggyMan 02-09-2008 06:16 PM

I second r-t.

sleepy jack 02-09-2008 07:25 PM

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Edited the original link, here's the finished version.

sleepy jack 02-09-2008 09:44 PM

MySpace.com - Ethan Smith - BELLINGHAM, Washington - Experimental / Ambient / Indie - www.myspace.com/musicethansmith

Its on myspace now.
CMON GUYS LISTEN

ProggyMan 02-09-2008 09:48 PM

Seems sort of...Bland. Great piano piece, but it needs more.

sleepy jack 02-09-2008 09:51 PM

I only have access to piano/drums/guitar/bass. I think some strings would be nice but I can't afford a violin. I can't think of much else to add without it sounding out of place.

ProggyMan 02-09-2008 09:54 PM

Ah. I'd say try using two quiet guitar pieces to flesh it out a little. Maybe that's getting away from your vision, dunno.


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