Songs that would be better without certain lines

Robodoenut · 09-06-2014, 07:52 AM

I recently listened to Stan by Eminem and I couldn't help but feel that the song would be better if it just ended with when Eminem says "but wait" and then end it with the dido part, I think it would be better without "that was you, damn" the way he says it ruins the tone set by the song, anyway I made this post to see if any of you think there are songs like this

Hades, Lord of the Dead · 09-06-2014, 08:21 AM

Pretty sure I know what Rick Ross's answer to this thread would be.

VEGANGELICA · 09-07-2014, 10:40 PM

I like Pink's song "Try" and *especially* the video (modern dance!)...

...but whenever I get to this line in the song, "When you're out there doing what you're doing," I have to scoff because that is SUCH a filler line. When you're out there doing what you're doing?!? Snort. It is just so nonspecific and generic.

I think the song would have been better without that line.

09-06-2014, 07:52 AM	#1 (permalink)
Robodoenut Groupie Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 14	Songs that would be better without certain lines I recently listened to Stan by Eminem and I couldn't help but feel that the song would be better if it just ended with when Eminem says "but wait" and then end it with the dido part, I think it would be better without "that was you, damn" the way he says it ruins the tone set by the song, anyway I made this post to see if any of you think there are songs like this

09-06-2014, 08:21 AM	#2 (permalink)
Hades, Lord of the Dead Groupie Join Date: Sep 2014 Location: The Underworld Posts: 19	Pretty sure I know what Rick Ross's answer to this thread would be.