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Old 07-04-2004, 08:07 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Yiess Covle is teh best-advice giver hahahah..seriously
But Tekron those are some really amazing lyrics!I also really like this part:

most would spill blood,
as did I
but this blood was ink,
and I would not die.

Damn i wish I could write like that..
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Old 07-04-2004, 08:48 PM   #12 (permalink)
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thanks, i think i could have done a better job with those lines though. the whole point was to take red ink and use it as "blood" and take out my fears and my thoughts and bleed it onto paper.
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Old 07-05-2004, 03:15 AM   #13 (permalink)
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i find political writing to be extremely useful in all aspects.
its not like anit-flag, though i ama big fan. its more subtle and symbolic. well i try to be. we should swap some more sometime. id like to hear your opinion on some of mine
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Old 07-05-2004, 01:06 PM   #14 (permalink)
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i find political writing to be extremely useful in all aspects.
its not like anit-flag, though i ama big fan. its more subtle and symbolic. well i try to be. we should swap some more sometime. id like to hear your opinion on some of mine
post some, oh yea i used to love anti-flag and i was in a band called "Aontaigh", means unite in gaelic. but it was kinda weird and i was like half-in half out. i wanted to sing, this was before i realized im a writer not a singer. eh, i played backup guitar for them 2 cuz their leads been playing 7 years.
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Old 07-05-2004, 06:58 PM   #15 (permalink)
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anytime ally. whats going on by the way? email me right?
ill post one thing for ya. i wrote this in yr 10, so its fairly sh!t compared to my more recent stuff....i dont want a name for it though, i dont know why. ill name it, "untitled"...

the child stands there vainly
in a futile attempt to be heard.
His unsubstantial voice lost
among the forbidding sea
of attempts to make a difference.
They mix.
Forming an impotent music.
Over looked, overheard.
Unavailing to the incoherent leaders.
They are the conductors of the miserable song.
The volume is lowered.
The song can still be heard.
Strain, you can hear it.
It can be transposed, deafened
But It Cannot Be Stopped.
The child has grown,
a child no longer.
The young man stands before them,
Nothing but a shell.
His hopes and dreams lost,
assimilated by a world.
This world abhors individuality.
The leaders smile.
Justice for the rich, whips for the poor.
He spoke of parity, of righteousness.
Nothing but a shell.
They say the empty can rattles the most,
his story goes out.
Revelations of revolution spread.
Quenched by the punishment of the now-old-man.
With him it begun,
Through him it ends...
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Old 07-05-2004, 08:56 PM   #16 (permalink)
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thats good, you were in 10th grade? or 10 years old = * no way *
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Old 07-05-2004, 08:58 PM   #17 (permalink)
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yeah 10th grade. bah thats on old one. but thanks man
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Old 07-05-2004, 09:09 PM   #18 (permalink)
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both of u guys are amazing writers. i cant write good at all but i might start. who knows
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Old 07-05-2004, 09:14 PM   #19 (permalink)
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thanks very much dude, start now, let it flow from your heart faster than blood and faster than air from your lungs, i can tell you know that i know i like this my life has begun. lol i guess im a poet, and i know know it.
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Old 07-05-2004, 09:14 PM   #20 (permalink)
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haha thanks man-from both of us. writing is easy to do. even if others dont think its good, if its personal and means something to you, then it is good and worth doing. id recommend it-you may even be the best
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