What do you think of this song? (house, title, quote)

xEmochicKx · 07-04-2004, 08:07 PM

Yiess Covle is teh best-advice giver hahahah..seriously

But Tekron those are some really amazing lyrics!I also really like this part:

most would spill blood,
as did I
but this blood was ink,
and I would not die.

Damn i wish I could write like that..

Tekron · 07-04-2004, 08:48 PM

thanks, i think i could have done a better job with those lines though. the whole point was to take red ink and use it as "blood" and take out my fears and my thoughts and bleed it onto paper.

covle · 07-05-2004, 03:15 AM

i find political writing to be extremely useful in all aspects.
its not like anit-flag, though i ama big fan. its more subtle and symbolic. well i try to be. we should swap some more sometime. id like to hear your opinion on some of mine

Tekron · 07-05-2004, 01:06 PM

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Originally Posted by covle

i find political writing to be extremely useful in all aspects.
its not like anit-flag, though i ama big fan. its more subtle and symbolic. well i try to be. we should swap some more sometime. id like to hear your opinion on some of mine

post some, oh yea i used to love anti-flag and i was in a band called "Aontaigh", means unite in gaelic. but it was kinda weird and i was like half-in half out. i wanted to sing, this was before i realized im a writer not a singer. eh, i played backup guitar for them 2 cuz their leads been playing 7 years.

covle · 07-05-2004, 06:58 PM

anytime ally. whats going on by the way? email me right?
ill post one thing for ya. i wrote this in yr 10, so its fairly sh!t compared to my more recent stuff....i dont want a name for it though, i dont know why. ill name it, "untitled"...

the child stands there vainly
in a futile attempt to be heard.
His unsubstantial voice lost
among the forbidding sea
of attempts to make a difference.
They mix.
Forming an impotent music.
Over looked, overheard.
Unavailing to the incoherent leaders.
They are the conductors of the miserable song.
The volume is lowered.
The song can still be heard.
Strain, you can hear it.
It can be transposed, deafened
But It Cannot Be Stopped.
The child has grown,
a child no longer.
The young man stands before them,
Nothing but a shell.
His hopes and dreams lost,
assimilated by a world.
This world abhors individuality.
The leaders smile.
Justice for the rich, whips for the poor.
He spoke of parity, of righteousness.
Nothing but a shell.
They say the empty can rattles the most,
his story goes out.
Revelations of revolution spread.
Quenched by the punishment of the now-old-man.
With him it begun,
Through him it ends...

Tekron · 07-05-2004, 08:56 PM

thats good, you were in 10th grade? or 10 years old = * no way *

covle · 07-05-2004, 08:58 PM

yeah 10th grade. bah thats on old one. but thanks man

Pimp_racer · 07-05-2004, 09:09 PM

both of u guys are amazing writers. i cant write good at all but i might start. who knows

Tekron · 07-05-2004, 09:14 PM

thanks very much dude, start now, let it flow from your heart faster than blood and faster than air from your lungs, i can tell you know that i know i like this my life has begun. lol i guess im a poet, and i know know it.

covle · 07-05-2004, 09:14 PM

haha thanks man-from both of us. writing is easy to do. even if others dont think its good, if its personal and means something to you, then it is good and worth doing. id recommend it-you may even be the best

07-05-2004, 03:15 AM	#13 (permalink)
covle Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: melbourne australia Posts: 334	i find political writing to be extremely useful in all aspects. its not like anit-flag, though i ama big fan. its more subtle and symbolic. well i try to be. we should swap some more sometime. id like to hear your opinion on some of mine __________________ LIVE.LOVE.BURN.DIE. whoa...i quoted atreyu, that means im hardcore. look how hardcore i am!! thats hardcore...XXX

07-05-2004, 06:58 PM	#15 (permalink)
covle Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: melbourne australia Posts: 334	anytime ally. whats going on by the way? email me right? ill post one thing for ya. i wrote this in yr 10, so its fairly sh!t compared to my more recent stuff....i dont want a name for it though, i dont know why. ill name it, "untitled"... the child stands there vainly in a futile attempt to be heard. His unsubstantial voice lost among the forbidding sea of attempts to make a difference. They mix. Forming an impotent music. Over looked, overheard. Unavailing to the incoherent leaders. They are the conductors of the miserable song. The volume is lowered. The song can still be heard. Strain, you can hear it. It can be transposed, deafened But It Cannot Be Stopped. The child has grown, a child no longer. The young man stands before them, Nothing but a shell. His hopes and dreams lost, assimilated by a world. This world abhors individuality. The leaders smile. Justice for the rich, whips for the poor. He spoke of parity, of righteousness. Nothing but a shell. They say the empty can rattles the most, his story goes out. Revelations of revolution spread. Quenched by the punishment of the now-old-man. With him it begun, Through him it ends... __________________ LIVE.LOVE.BURN.DIE. whoa...i quoted atreyu, that means im hardcore. look how hardcore i am!! thats hardcore...XXX

07-05-2004, 08:58 PM	#17 (permalink)
covle Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: melbourne australia Posts: 334	yeah 10th grade. bah thats on old one. but thanks man __________________ LIVE.LOVE.BURN.DIE. whoa...i quoted atreyu, that means im hardcore. look how hardcore i am!! thats hardcore...XXX

07-05-2004, 09:09 PM	#18 (permalink)
Pimp_racer Screamo Specialist Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Ft. Myers, Florida Posts: 228	both of u guys are amazing writers. i cant write good at all but i might start. who knows __________________ Whos better than Thrice... NOONE

07-05-2004, 09:14 PM	#20 (permalink)
covle Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: melbourne australia Posts: 334	haha thanks man-from both of us. writing is easy to do. even if others dont think its good, if its personal and means something to you, then it is good and worth doing. id recommend it-you may even be the best __________________ LIVE.LOVE.BURN.DIE. whoa...i quoted atreyu, that means im hardcore. look how hardcore i am!! thats hardcore...XXX

07-04-2004, 08:07 PM	#11 (permalink)
xEmochicKx Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 91	Yiess Covle is teh best-advice giver hahahah..seriously But Tekron those are some really amazing lyrics!I also really like this part: most would spill blood, as did I but this blood was ink, and I would not die. Damn i wish I could write like that..

07-04-2004, 08:48 PM	#12 (permalink)
Tekron Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: reading, MA Posts: 84	thanks, i think i could have done a better job with those lines though. the whole point was to take red ink and use it as "blood" and take out my fears and my thoughts and bleed it onto paper.

07-05-2004, 08:56 PM	#16 (permalink)
Tekron Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: reading, MA Posts: 84	thats good, you were in 10th grade? or 10 years old = * no way *

07-05-2004, 09:14 PM	#19 (permalink)
Tekron Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: reading, MA Posts: 84	thanks very much dude, start now, let it flow from your heart faster than blood and faster than air from your lungs, i can tell you know that i know i like this my life has begun. lol i guess im a poet, and i know know it.