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Old 05-14-2007, 03:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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LYING POLITICIANS
The sad fact is that a majority of politicians will say anything to keep the peoples blind support. One of the major lies is the lie of “The war on terror” actually being that. This illegal war was actually planed many years ago during the presidency of the George Bush senior. Bush senior and his officials came up with the “Project for A New American Century” also known as PNAC. This was a plan to take Saddam Hussein out of power. The main catch of this plan is that they were going to wait for an attack on America like another Pearl Harbor. When 9/11 came the government viewed it as a perfect opportunity to execute PNAC. When George W. Bush started the war he did not have any real evidence that Saddam had anything to with the attacks. Yet he started the war saying that it was Saddam for sure. Bush also made outrageous claims that Saddam was manufacturing weapons of mass destruction. The search for these weapons turned up no weapons.
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Old 05-14-2007, 03:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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list your sources
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 05-14-2007, 03:44 PM   #3 (permalink)
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whats your point?

this isn't exactly new informations
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Old 05-14-2007, 11:22 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Like Mikey said list your sources, plus paragraphs are cool and this is pretty old info, you're probably going to get a low grade.
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Old 05-15-2007, 03:00 PM   #5 (permalink)
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im still not done ...... this project isnt about new information ......
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Old 05-15-2007, 04:57 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Correct your grammar, cite your sources, title your paper something different, and paraphrase better.

If the paper's based on old information that is generally well-known, then you should make sure it's written fairly well, especially if you're writing it for English class, I'm assuming.
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Old 05-15-2007, 06:11 PM   #7 (permalink)
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