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View Poll Results: Which is the best story?
Lyrics 0 0%
Lobsters 2 12.50%
Bill 0 0%
The InBetweeners 2 12.50%
The Day I was Insane... 1 6.25%
A Journey Of Our Life 0 0%
The Comatorium 2 12.50%
A Path To Consequence 1 6.25%
The Accidental... 5 31.25%
Dracula's Division 2 12.50%
The Case Of People Who Have Too Much Time On Their Hands 1 6.25%
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Old 02-07-2011, 10:13 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Your choices:

The InBetweeners
The Inbetweeners Pt. 1 The sensation of somethi - The InBetweeners

The Case Of People Who Have Too Much Time On Their Hands
'I've got a special delivery for a fat bastard' PC - The Case Of People Who Have Too Much Time On Their Hands

Dracula's Division
It wouldn’t be the first day in which something - Dracula's Division

The Accidental...
ACT I Scene 1 (At rise MAN is seat - The Accidental...

The Day I was Insane
“The Day I was Insane...” A sky jaded with

Lyrics
Oh my eyes glazed over My stance slouched and fra - Lyrics

A Path To Consequence
I sat there, staring blankly at my epitaph – not - A path to consequence.

The Comatorium
The Comatorium I awoke in a place I’ve never - The Comatorium

A Journey Of Our Life
Don – his cloudy face raining. A slight drizzl - A Journey of Our Life

Lobsters
Look at them, aren’t they nice? So red, such - Lobsters

Bill
Bill was driving home from a 13 hour day at his la
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Old 02-07-2011, 10:17 AM   #2 (permalink)
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You cannot vote for yourself, if you do I will discount your vote.
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Old 02-07-2011, 01:27 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The Accidental Abortionist has to be Sara (ThePhantasio). Excellent writing, very well paced and I loved the alliteration.
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Old 02-07-2011, 02:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Note: Good tip for anybody. Always paragraph, and never have more than one person speaking in a paragraph. Makes it hard to read otherwise.
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Old 02-07-2011, 09:29 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I can't believe I missed out. Damn life. James there needs to be more of these competitions it's a fantastic turn out. I am looking forward to sitting down and reading the submitted work.
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Old 02-07-2011, 09:57 PM   #6 (permalink)
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You are such a slacker, I didn't think you were going to get yours in on time. Procrastinator :P
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Old 02-07-2011, 10:25 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Really enjoying these - I've read six of them in full so far; five more to go, and I'll be able to vote! (Although I'll probably re-read a few)

Good work to everyone. Really, wow!
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I have about four more to go but I have read some really nice ones already.
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Old 02-08-2011, 01:51 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Did not read all of them yet but the one about Dracula was the best written so far. Hands down. I think Lyrics is Storymilo's and I think The Inbetweeners is Stone Bird's or UnchainedBallad's.
Lobsters.....god man.......
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Old 02-08-2011, 06:22 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Finally made a decision and voted, but I was immensely torn between three of them. There wasn't a bad one in the bunch, though!
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