Poetry
Poetry is arguably a dying art form. I happen to enjoy it. I'm not a fan of the inaccessible works you may get in your lit class-- not that the stuff isn't anthologized for a good reason.
I am not a poet, just a fan. Even if I did write, I doubt I would have the balls to share it, so kudos to those who do. I really enjoy modern/contemporary poets and their works. There are several literary magazines and on-line publications with a lot of good stuff from some very relevant poets. I'm creating this thread to share some poems that I love. PLEASE feel free to add any you please or share any poets you like. Some of my favorites: Pablo Neruda Kim Addonizio Ash Bowen Sylvia Plath Emily Dickinson William Meredith, just to list a few This is one of my all-time favorites. It's the actual poet, Geoffrey Brock(who teaches at Arkansas), reading the poem, and the crude animation is amusing. Below the video is the actual poem. It was so simple: you came back to me And I was happy. Nothing seemed to matter But that. That you had gone away from me And lived for days with him—it didn’t matter. That I had been left to care for our old dog And house alone—couldn’t have mattered less! On all this, you and I and our happy dog Agreed. We slept. The world was worriless. I woke in the morning, brimming with old joys Till the fact-checker showed up, late, for work And started in: Item: it’s years, not days. Item: you had no dog. Item: she isn’t back, In fact, she just remarried. And oh yes, item: you Left her, remember? I did? I did. (I do.) Geoffrey Brock |
I couldn't help but to share one more this evening. This is a freakin awesome poem. There is no doubt that in his time, Pablo, pulled more ass than a toilet seat.
“Sonnet XVII I do not love you as if you were salt-rose, or topaz, or the arrow of carnations the fire shoots off. I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul. I love you as the plant that never blooms but carries in itself the light of hidden flowers; thanks to your love a certain solid fragrance, risen from the earth, lives darkly in my body. I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where. I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride; so I love you because I know no other way than this: where I does not exist, nor you, so close that your hand on my chest is my hand, so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep. ” ― Pablo Neruda |
Really nice stuff man/ woman! Keep posting please! :)
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^^ Neruda has many great poems, this one happens to be my favorite. His book of love sonnets is pretty amazing. Sonnet form isn't the easiest to write in and it's all been translated from Spanish. Imagine what is lost in translation. Neruda was pretty loved and famous. He's Chilean, supported communism, and served as a diplomat. There is a movie about him which I happen to enjoy: Il Postino.
And I'm a woman. And I'm afraid I've revealed myself to be a huge poetry nerd :) This poem is a little dark and menacing. I like a strong last line. I found it in Best New Poets 2011. Jennifer Luebbers Recess Spring, and a man took a girl to the woods by the schoolyard. Police hovered in helicopters; they hemmed the trees in tape. The recess monitor circled with a bronze bell, its rusty clapper a tongue to warn. The jump rope was a thick braid touched to the pavement, and a choir of mouths sang Cinderella, dressed in yella, Went downtown to meet a fella. How I wanted to be the girl gone missing. How I wanted the world to watch. I thought to go to the woods in white, weave a chain of daisies for my throat, a garland of dandelion to stain my hands, a crown of pollen to seed my hair. To tie my wrists with ropes to a tree. To wait for the police, the priest, the teacher, my father-- any dangerous man who might come to save. Who among them would unbind my wrists? Who among them would bear the knife? |
One more from Best New Poets 2011. Another poem on the darker side. The theme today seems to be child abuse.
Ash Bowen How Gravity Hated Us My sister was the first to learn how gravity hated our family--a spinning plunge into the gorge of echoy quartz when she failed to cling to air like Father imagined. Her hollow bones made him certain she'd been born for flight so he'd splayed her among the tools of his shop and stripped the rivets from her body, took her inside his shower and shaved her nose into a beak. Her talons scratched for balance as she crept across her perch, eyes rolling over the canyons as she stumbled into free-fall and Earth climbed up to meet her. She rose, coughing teeth into her palms, shivering impact rubble from her shoulders, trembling in the feathery shadow of our father whose fingers were already fitting me with wings. |
How to write an erotic letter
This is great. I love the letter to the father.
Anthony Farrington HOW TO WRITE AN EROTIC LETTER You must empty yourself first. Erase everything you’ve written. If you’re naked, revise all your clothes back on. Anyway, they’re all you have. What matters is the taking them off. Begin with a title “Concerning insatiable carnal urges.” Attach a handwritten note that says, Keep your hair down and If you come here, I’ll tell you something awful about someone perfect. Scathing and lovely to hear. Remember, each time, each letter is an entire love affair, say ‘A’ is for almost. ‘B’ is the emptiness that follows. The letter ‘O’ is what the body believes. If she writes in a letter, Sometimes our bodies are too much for us, quote her. How she turns you on turns her on. You can quote me on that. I am remembering the sweep of your hair, the light on your breasts, your beautiful eyes expanding; I am remembering the slickness inside you— how wet, how deliciously warm. I think of your uncontrollable breath; I think of your nipples kissing my chest; I think of your mouth on my neck and the sweet taste of your tongue in my mouth. Set aside nothing for later. Call this, I was kissing and sucking and wanting so badly to **** you silly, silly. And erase it. But enjoy it first. Feel free to write a pretend letter to her father. Quote from it: “Dear her father, Sir, we are sorry to inform you, sir, of the mysterious demise of your daughter. It seems she was somehow— sorry to say this indelicately—****ed to death…obviously a scandalous affair. Ropes and long-necked bottles and, oh, we mustn’t go on. A man was dead too, sir—exhaustion it seems or dementia. With sincere regrets, I am yours.” If she uses the word **** in her letters you use the word **** but at the end of the letter only. This is not prudery, it is teasing and she will appreciate it. I want my face in your hair, your perfume in my breath, my finger tips softly touching the sides of your ribs, your waist, your thighs, your breast, your face—what is important here, in this letter, your hand must touch her, in this letter, so she wants, over and over, what is not there. If you’re foolish enough to write Oh God prematurely, you deserve what you don’t get. As a cautionary measure, delete all references to god: Jesus it feels so good and Holy ****. Consider keeping: God, you are so slick; so goddamn delicious. But you’ve already used slick once. Now three times. There is nothing wrong with I want to hear your voice coming and coming but admit, it’s a one-shot phrase. Damp cotton will open caves in your mind. Promise her: I need you electric in my mouth. Write: Concerning the art of seduction and leave it at that. Tease her: Truth or dare? End before you’ve said everything. Realize everything you are, in this letter, precedes you— which is the loneliness of writing. What you want is never now. That’s the essence of desire. What she reads is always past; that’s despair. Think about how— if she could—she would swallow the world (pillow and all) take it all inside— all of you—so it could come shattering out again. But don’t fool yourself, this letter needs to be filled with sorrow. Write: Sometimes I wish I could be in your body so I could feel what you feel. Sometimes, I wish you could be in my body—your own name amazingly on the tip of your new tongue, the smell of you (I mean me) in your fresh mind, seeing your old body arch away from your new body, hearing seeing feeling what was once you hold her breath; hearing her becoming, coming apart all around you. And then your own foreign release beyond your whole body. The cracking— it feels so open—this desire, almost to weep. Then weep. In the space of a letter you once were. |
you do not know me if you think i will not kill you
This poem is GREAT. Read it. Another love poem. My spouse and I have a similar agreement. My favorite line: "I tell you you do not/know me if you think I will not/kill you."
The Promise by Sharon Olds With the second drink, at the restaurant, holding hands on the bare table, we are at it again, renewing our promise to kill each other. You are drinking gin, night-blue juniper berry dissolving in your body, I am drinking Fume, chewing its fragrant dirt and smoke, we are taking on earth, we are part soil already, and wherever we are, we are also in our bed, fitted, naked, closely along each other, half passed out after love, drifting back and forth across the border of consciousness, our bodies buoyant, clasped. Your hand tightens on the table. You're a little afraid I'll chicken out. What you do not want is to lie in a hospital bed for a year after a stroke, without being able to think or die, you do not want to be tied to a chair like a prim grandmother, cursing. The room is dim around us, ivory globes, pink curtains, bound at the waist - and outside, a weightless, luminous, lifted-up summer twilight. I tell you you do not know me if you think I will not kill you. Think how we have floated together eye to eye, nipple to nipple, sex to sex, the halves of a creature drifting up to the lip of matter and over it - you know me from the bright, blood- flecked delivery room, if a lion had you in its jaws I would attack it, if the ropes binding your soul are your own wrists, I will cut them. |
“What Do Women Want?”
By Kim Addonizio I want a red dress. I want it flimsy and cheap, I want it too tight, I want to wear it until someone tears it off me. I want it sleeveless and backless, this dress, so no one has to guess what’s underneath. I want to walk down the street past Thrifty’s and the hardware store with all those keys glittering in the window, past Mr. and Mrs. Wong selling day-old donuts in their café, past the Guerra brothers slinging pigs from the truck and onto the dolly, hoisting the slick snouts over their shoulders. I want to walk like I’m the only woman on earth and I can have my pick. I want that red dress bad. I want it to confirm your worst fears about me, to show you how little I care about you or anything except what I want. When I find it, I’ll pull that garment from its hanger like I’m choosing a body to carry me into this world, through the birth-cries and the love-cries too, and I’ll wear it like bones, like skin, it’ll be the goddamned dress they bury me in. |
This strike me as "short stories".I like my poems to rhyme.
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Poetry doesn't have to rhyme. It comes in many different forms-- just like music. So here's a rhyming poem. A favorite of mine from Plath. This poem is a villanelle. These particular poems have a refrain and there is a definite rhyme scheme-- all the second lines rhyme(or in this case, a slant rhyme). Besides the repeating pattern, the content is a favorite subject. Mad Girl Sylvia Plath "I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead; I lift my lids and all is born again. (I think I made you up inside my head.) The stars go waltzing out in blue and red, And arbitrary blackness gallops in: I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. I dreamed that you bewitched me into bed And sung me moon-struck, kissed me quite insane. (I think I made you up inside my head.) God topples from the sky, hell's fires fade: Exit seraphim and Satan's men: I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. I fancied you'd return the way you said, But I grow old and I forget your name. (I think I made you up inside my head.) I should have loved a thunderbird instead; At least when spring comes they roar back again. I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. (I think I made you up inside my head.)" |
katsy, I also love poetry and so I'm glad you made this thread!
Recently, thanks to someone who joined MusicBanter and was here briefly, I learned about the poet Philip Larkin. I'm very happy I did, because Larkin wrote a poem that is now one of my favorites: * * * * * The Mower by Philip Larkin (1922 - 1985) The mower stalled, twice; kneeling, I found A hedgehog jammed up against the blades, Killed. It had been in the long grass. I had seen it before, and even fed it, once. Now I had mauled its unobtrusive world Unmendably. Burial was no help: Next morning I got up and it did not. The first day after a death, the new absence Is always the same; we should be careful Of each other, we should be kind While there is still time. |
I like Larkin, though I have never read that one before. I enjoyed it very much, thanks for posting! It's nice to have another poetry fan around.
Read this one yesterday on Verse Daily, and WOW. It is truly beautiful. The Comet Emma Törzs I re-named the comet but nothing stuck. What do I know of bone- deep lonely, of the beautiful freeze, of running a circuit through the stars until all landmarks are my own staring eyes: of families in general, what do I know? Say I'm young. Say I am the aftertaste of all my parents' grief, a childhood spent in the downwind of chicken blood, recurring dreams of being left behind—my mother kneeling by the VCR to watch a video of her lost daughter— and this is Hell: believing you can be a lens and meet your loved ones' eyes beyond the screen, smacking your pain against glass like a doomed swallow The half-life of loss is forever.There is hope we don't get over. When my son began to die, I did not record his voice, but let him simmer, speechless, in my memory, while I tried to gain the faith to think we'd meet again. I held his fist against my lips, I closed my teeth around the juncture of his throat and chest, I said you'll be the fire of the sun, and I will circle you until you draw me close, until our nearness breaks me into pieces and you burn me whole. I would have ripped his heart out and consumed it if I'd thought that it would choke me: I would have been the eternal mouth. Say I'm young. Say the speeding rock of my body is as bright as any resurrection, and I have time to shake before I hit the earth. |
everything this guy does rips my heart out and gives me hope simultaneously. it's definitely spoken word, and i'm not privy to the vernacular of poetry classifiers, so i don't know if it belongs here, but's a bunch of words coming out of a guy's mouth and it's so god damn beautiful...
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PAN, thanks for posting. I would say it belongs here, spoken word is a performance art and the speaker here is for sure using poetry. He has some really great/witty/clever lines. Interestingly enough, after I did some research, today's spoken word originated from the poetry of the Harlem Renaissance.
So, I've decided to share a poem from one of the greats from that time. Langston Hughes is not a favorite of mine, but the following is pretty heavily anthologized. He does have a book of short stories, "The Ways of White Folks", which I happen to like very much. Langston Hughes "The Negro Speaks of Rivers" I've known rivers: I've known rivers ancient as the world and older than the flow of human blood in human veins. My soul has grown deep like the rivers. I bathed in the Euphrates when dawns were young. I built my hut near the Congo and it lulled me to sleep. I looked upon the Nile and raised the pyramids above it. I heard the singing of the Mississippi when Abe Lincoln went down to New Orleans, and I've seen its muddy bosom turn all golden in the sunset. I've known rivers: Ancient, dusky rivers. My soul has grown deep like the rivers. |
Currently I'm living in Italy,and here I started to love Hermeticism,which is a suggestive form of poetry. I'll post a couple of my favorite ones.
VIGIL (BY GIUSEPPE UNGARETTI) A whole night thrown near the body of a slain comrade his mouth snarling at the full moon his clawed fingers ripping into my silence I wrote letters full of love Never did I so cling to life. XENIA (BY EUGENIO MONTALE) Your arm in mine, I've descended a million stairs at least. And now that you're not here, a void yawns at every step. Even so our long journey was brief. I'm still en route, with no further need of reservations, connections, ruses, the constant contempt of those who think reality is what one sees. I’ve descended millions of stairs giving you my arm, not of course because four eyes see better. I went downstairs with you because I knew the only real eyes, however darkened, belonged to you. |
I love poets reading their poetry. I don't know why, but my favorite has been Sylvia Plath reading "Daddy."
I love her speaking voice. Also, there are several lines in this poem which give me absolute chills. I know, it's very, very well-know, but I think that's for good reason. It's really fantastic. So daddy, I'm finally through. The black telephone's off at the root, The voices just can't worm through. If I've killed one man, I've killed two-- The vampire who said he was you And drank my blood for a year, Seven years, if you want to know. Daddy, you can lie back now. There's a stake in your fat black heart And the villagers never liked you. They are dancing and stamping on you. They always knew it was you. Daddy, daddy, you bastard, I'm through. Also, TS Eliot reading "The Hollow Men" gives me chills. I actually read this for a public speaking class. And Bukowski reading his poems, wonderful. I chose "Style," because Bukowski says the word 'style' better than any person who has ever lived. Also I love this poem. And, just for kicks, my favorite thing Christopher Walken has ever done: |
Spoken word is more about performance than poetry. The problem (depending on your perspective)/ strength (depending on your perspective) is that there are cliches stacked on cliches. Therefore, we "identify" with the poem/speaker because we've heard the sentiment before.
Having said that, there are lots of witty turns-of-phrase in spoken word, which is its saving grace. |
Plath is one of my favorites and this is one of my favorites by her husband, Ted Hughes-- who is kind of a big deal all on his own.
"Lovesong" He loved her and she loved him. His kisses sucked out her whole past and future or tried to He had no other appetite She bit him she gnawed him she sucked She wanted him complete inside her Safe and sure forever and ever Their little cries fluttered into the curtains Her eyes wanted nothing to get away Her looks nailed down his hands his wrists his elbows He gripped her hard so that life Should not drag her from that moment He wanted all future to cease He wanted to topple with his arms round her Off that moment's brink and into nothing Or everlasting or whatever there was Her embrace was an immense press To print him into her bones His smiles were the garrets of a fairy palace Where the real world would never come Her smiles were spider bites So he would lie still till she felt hungry His words were occupying armies Her laughs were an assassin's attempts His looks were bullets daggers of revenge His glances were ghosts in the corner with horrible secrets His whispers were whips and jackboots Her kisses were lawyers steadily writing His caresses were the last hooks of a castaway Her love-tricks were the grinding of locks And their deep cries crawled over the floors Like an animal dragging a great trap His promises were the surgeon's gag Her promises took the top off his skull She would get a brooch made of it His vows pulled out all her sinews He showed her how to make a love-knot Her vows put his eyes in formalin At the back of her secret drawer Their screams stuck in the wall Their heads fell apart into sleep like the two halves Of a lopped melon, but love is hard to stop In their entwined sleep they exchanged arms and legs In their dreams their brains took each other hostage In the morning they wore each other's face Ted Hughes |
More Neruda
Don't Go Far Off Don't go far off, not even for a day, because -- because -- I don't know how to say it: a day is long and I will be waiting for you, as in an empty station when the trains are parked off somewhere else, asleep. Don't leave me, even for an hour, because then the little drops of anguish will all run together, the smoke that roams looking for a home will drift into me, choking my lost heart. Oh, may your silhouette never dissolve on the beach; may your eyelids never flutter into the empty distance. Don't leave me for a second, my dearest, because in that moment you'll have gone so far I'll wander mazily over all the earth, asking, Will you come back? Will you leave me here, dying? Pablo Neruda |
I've decided to post some prose. I like this stuff, it's all related and easy/quick to read. I think you will enjoy. I beleive you would call it a verse essay.
I've posted the first two essays, the rest can be found at the following link: Prose » Linebreak The Sick Book By Carley Moore "Hospital Time" I was nine and away from home for the first time. There was a schedule, but I wasn’t in on it. I started to understand the weird rhythm of doctors—the way they’re never around when you need them or always with another patient or worst of all, in surgery. I went to appointments I didn’t know I had, and always without my parents who were two hours away at their jobs. I began to cultivate irrational fears: the orderly will lose me and I’ll never see my parents again, the nurse will forget to tell my parents I’m having a brain scan and they’ll leave without seeing me, or somehow my roommate and I will become separated and I’ll have to sleep alone. "For Example" Like the time I couldn’t get my underwear on. Like the time I wore a body stocking and got painted in plaster. Like the time I was carried home from the zoo. Like the time everyone was way too nice to me at the birthday party. Like the time I fell off the bleachers. Like the time I ate the gravel. Like the time I stepped on a bottle cap and someone’s older brother carried me home bleeding. Like the time I couldn’t walk across the lawn. Like the time when I got extra Valentines for being “special." |
Some more prose poetry:
CLAUDIA CORTESE Dear Claudia— I don’t know why you made a broken girl. I bury glass in the moonlight, eat Oreos at midnight, dream my skin abuzz with knives. Give me red hair, tits spry as sprites. Make me a Siren on the riverbank, bewitching boys with my liquid song. I’d scissor around them, take what’s mine. When you said I dreamt my father ****ed me, did you imagine your own father rocking above you? It’s true, I hate my belly fat, hide behind the spruce in gym class, but you don’t know why, Claudia. You think I feed worms to Mabel, tell her about the six-pack rings that strangle sea turtles, because I hate her. To love is to suffer, and to suffer is to give yourself to this world. The sun-freckled oak will blacken, night rotting its branches, and this I swear—if you write what happened to me beneath the unlit porch-light, I will wrap your veins around your throat. Regards, Lucy AND THE FOLLOW UP: CLAUDIA CORTESE Lucy, I’ve shorn the doll’s hair, sprinkled the strands on your bed. I know what you crave—welts on the wrist, a punishment, a cry. You need me to live, and I need you to feel. When I wrote you slept in a box, a box within a box, I meant we all need touch and more touch. There’s a razor in the peach, and your sister plants teeth beneath your bed. Stitch those images to your eyes because only time will tell who’s the wolf at your window—if his strings of saliva will bless or burn you. When I said you hoped your father wouldn’t hear the Oreos crunch in your mouth, I meant to say the body remembers woodsmoke and barns, the insects buzzing above you. The cypress is blue-veined and beautiful—your ticket out of this girl-forsaken town. Love, Claudia |
Brutal
By Andrea Cohen Brutal to give the prisoner a window— a blue sky glimpse— as if an afterlife existed. Brutal for you to parade in a body in the same room where I dream you. |
I've been getting into writing sonnets again and recently read and was impressed by the following sonnet, "Coming to Terms," by Catherine Chandler.
Crafted very well, her sonnet describes the somber subject matter with delicacy and immediacy so that the painful loss feels very real to me. I remember those elastic belly panel pants and all the nightmares I had about my unborn baby dying. I'm so glad none of them came true, and so sad that people's worst nightmares sometimes do: * * * Coming to Terms -- by Catherine Chandler I put aside my white smocked cotton blouse, the pants with the elastic belly panel. The only music in the empty house strains from a distant country western channel. My breasts are weeping. I’ve been given leave — a week in which to heal and convalesce. I peel away the ceiling stars, unweave the year I’d entered on your christening dress. I rearrange my premises — perverse assumptions! — gather unripe figs; throw out the bloodied bedclothes; scour the universe in search of you. And God. And go about my business, as my crooked smile displays the artful look of ordinary days. * * * |
What a great thread Katsy! You have some very lovely pieces here and some talented writers too.
I also have a great love for poetry, erotic and sapphic verse in particular. Hope you don't mind if I add a couple of my favs. Love's Acolyte Many have loved you with lips and fingers And lain with you till the moon went out; Many have brought you lover's gifts! And some have left their dreams on your doorstep. But I who am youth among your lovers Come like an acolyte to worship, My thirsting blood restrained by reverence, My heart a wordless prayer. The candles of desire are lighted, I bow my head, afraid before you, A mendicant who craves your bounty Ashamed of what small gifts she brings. Elsa Gidlow |
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San Antonio
by Naomi Shihab Nye Tonight I lingered over your name, the delicate assembly of vowels a voice inside my head. You were sleeping when I arrived. I stood by your bed and watched the sheets rise gently. I knew what slant of light would make you turn over. It was then I felt the highways slide out of my hands. I remembered the old men in the west side cafe, dealing dominoes like magical charms. It was then I knew, like a woman looking backward, I could not leave you, or find anyone I loved more. |
Awesomeness:
Traci Brimhall Incomplete Address To The Lord When I found that mass of scales and muscle, saw one anaconda twist around another, watched a split tongue flick the air, choosing me, black as the devil’s own and twice as thick, males coiled around the female tickling her back with their spurs, I knew I’d give anything to be her. I felt the pulse in my eyelid, tasted the ants that paraded over my plantains at night, drank all the darkness out of my wife’s breast. Lord, I’d rather be crazy than broken. The city bore its own children who crawled from the gutters, their eyes in their pockets and angels’ ashes in their mouths. They don’t believe you exist even though they wrap slices of lamb in the pages of the book you wrote for the illiterate shepherds. I know you know this. You with your name on the lips of graceless women. You with your face tattooed on men’s arms. You who weep fire but never for the dead. My Lord, I admit it. I let the angel win. He wrapped himself around me, pinned me to the riverbed, and I rose up wet, reeking, wearing my shadow like a dress. When I pressed my chest, milk bled a halo into the water and vanished. For an hour I was whole, my heart undressed itself. Temptation wore me down to my socks and assembled me back into my old body. I’m still the man you made in the image of who you used to be, my lover turned back into my rib, and you who gifted me with a second skin, I don’t want your inch of flesh, your interdisciplinary erotica, or the heaven you held to my feet like fire. I want everyone who comes looking for me to find— |
^ My favorite lines are "I don't want [...] the heaven you held to my feet like fire" ... and of course the great descriptions of mating snakes!
Today while volunteering in my child's classroom, I read a short volume of children's poetry written by Langston Hughes. I was curious to read the book because I was familiar with little of his poetry. Most of the poems in the book were not memorable to me, but I liked a few, especially the one below: Merry-Go-Round by Langston Hughes COLORED CHILD AT CARNIVAL Where is the Jim Crow section On this merry-go-round, Mister, cause I want to ride? Down South where I come from White and colored Can't sit side by side. Down South on the train There's a Jim Crow car. On the bus we're put in the back-- But there ain't no back To a merry-go-round! Where's the horse For a kid that's black? Merry-Go-Round - A poem by Langston Hughes - American Poems |
I wrote a poem whilst away on holiday last week, it's the first time I have written a poem since school although I have written songs. I hope this doesn't contravene the posting rules, this isn't a case of shameless self promotion but mods can delete this post if they deem it to be. Anyway, it's about smoking.
Accusing eyes with faux surprise, Don't get to see what they despise, The result of a bad choice made, The disappointment will not fade, It's up to me to make the change, My lifestyle needs to rearrange, A promise that goes unfulfilled, The trust in me has long been killed. |
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I'm reading this poem next week at an African-American read-in to celebrate Black History Month. I almost went with Soujourner Truth's "Aint I a Woman" which is also below.
"Be Nobody's Darling" Alice Walker Be nobody's darling; Be an outcast. Take the contradictions Of your life And wrap around You like a shawl, To parry stones To keep you warm. Watch the people succumb To madness With ample cheer; Let them look askance at you And you askance reply. Be an outcast; Be pleased to walk alone (Uncool) Or line the crowded River beds With other impetuous Fools. Make a merry gathering On the bank Where thousands perished For brave hurt words They said. But be nobody's darling; Be an outcast. Qualified to live Among your dead. "Ain't I a Woman" -- speech deleivered to a Women's Rights Convention in 1851 Soujourner Truth "Well, children, where there is so much racket there must be something out of kilter. I think that between the ******s of the South and the women at the North, all talking about rights, the white men will be in a fix pretty soon. But what's all this here talking about? That man over there say that women needs to be helped into carriages, lifted over ditches, and to have the best place everywhere. Nobody ever helps me into carriages, or over mud-puddles, or gives me any best place! And ain't I a woman? Look at me! Look at my arm! I have ploughed, and planted, and gathered into barns, and no man could head me! And ain't I a woman? I could work as much and eat as much as a man-when I could get it-and bear the lash as well! And ain't I a woman? and when I cried out with my mother's grief, none but Jesus heard me. And ain't I a woman? Then they talk about this thing in the head; what's this they call it? ['Intellect' someone whispers near.] That's right, honey. What's that got to do with women's rights or ******'s rights? If my cup won't hold but a pint, and yours holds a quart, wouldn't you be mean not to let me have my little half-measure full? Then that little man in black there, he says women can't have as much rights as men, because Christ wasn't a woman! Where did your Christ come from? Where did your Christ come from? From God and a woman! Men had nothing to do with Him. If the first woman God ever made was strong enough to turn the world upside down all alone, these women together ought to be able to turn it back, and get it right side up again! And now that they are asking to do it, the men better let them! Obliged to you for hearing me, and now old Sojourner has got nothing more to say." |
Sleep wise bird
Strong as can be Independent and stunning In all of its glory Across the tree tops Forever free Sleep young butterfly Wings on the moon Fly away to another world Where the grass is greener And fairy tales are the norm Sleep rising caterpillar Going to shed the old Taking in the new New coat of identity, Comforting the ancient Enchanting the young Sleep new soul, For tomorrow is a new day. |
Hello, i am a big fan of poetry. I always enjoy to read poem. It is really interesting for me.
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poetry is awesome .......
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OH, this **** is good.
The Quiet World By Jeffrey McDaniel In an effort to get people to look into each other’s eyes more, and also to appease the mutes, the government has decided to allot each person exactly one hundred and sixty-seven words, per day. When the phone rings, I put it to my ear without saying hello. In the restaurant I point at chicken noodle soup. I am adjusting well to the new way. Late at night, I call my long distance lover, proudly say I only used fifty-nine today. I saved the rest for you. When she doesn’t respond, I know she’s used up all her words, so I slowly whisper I love you thirty-two and a third times. After that, we just sit on the line and listen to each other breathe. |
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I especially like the humorous situation in which the man's lover has wastefully used up all her words, while he has saved so many of his words just for her. Even though she didn't save any for him, he still uses the rest of his to tell her the most important thing again and again: "I love you, I love you (etc.), I." I also like the part where they just sit and listen to each other breathe because they've used up their allotment of words. I guess when one gets prank calls where someone is breathing heavily, that must be what is going on. ;) For you math buffs out there, I checked if the poem's word math adds up, and, satisfyingly, it does! The man used... 59 words during the day, 11 words when telling her, "I only used fifty-nine today. I saved the rest for you," (apparently, "fifty-nine" counts as one word rather than two), and 97 words by saying, "I love you" 32 and 1/3 times. Total words used = 167! * * * Today I reread a vivid and realistic poem by Mary Oliver that I first read in 2010 at the memorial service of a family friend, whose relatives printed it on the back of the service program. I remember my dad was with me that day, and so the poem is bitter-sweet to me, since he has now, like our family friend, also had his mind that was "as lightning" come to nothing. "Morning Walk" by Mary Oliver Little by little the ocean empties its pockets - foam and fluff; and the long, tangled ornateness of seaweed; and the whelks, ribbed or with ivory knobs, but so knocked about in the sea's blue hands that their story is at length only about the wholeness of destruction - they come one by one to the shore, to the shallows, to the mussel-dappled rocks, to the rise to dryness, to the edge of the town, to offer, to the measure that we will accept it, this wisdom: though the hour be whole, though the minute be deep and rich, though the heart be a singer of hot red songs and the mind be as lightning, what all the music will come to is nothing, only the sheets of fog and the fog's blue bell - you do not believe it now, you are not supposed to. You do not believe it yet - but you will - morning by singular morning, and shell by broken shell. |
I read this sonnet today and was impressed by how deftly the author not only evokes the feeling of the location described, but also portrays the perspective of the visiting vacationer:
"Tourist in India" by Gail White Monkeys are urban animals in Delhi, peacocks are city birds. And everywhere I’m drowned in waves of men who want to sell me overpriced souvenirs. I fight for air and reach the marble shores of my hotel. Thank God for Lutyens! Where would Delhi be without the British? They used power well, spread English, trained the boys that serve my tea. But O seductive East! Today I found a Hindu temple, entered and was crowned with marigolds, made puja, walked around a lingam thrice and sang “Jai Hanuman” while monkeys chattered and without a sound my Christian ghost indulgently looked on. |
Nice collection of poems in this thread. Love the Mary Oliver one, and anything by Bukowski.
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