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Old 09-28-2015, 11:20 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Question 30 minute song

hey yo its not really my fault that the stars didnt alline in your favor, go ahead and sign this here waver
because im about to spit some fire, what yall desire.
here we go.

please dont hate me mama im only doing what i thought was right
i tried to show you the light, but when it came to the fight, i was nothing
i tried to fight back but ended up having a heart attack
i fell the ground, making no sound
it made me weak, the words that i speak

the only truth, the truth for you and i...

the last time i saw you, you were sitting in bed half dead
it made me wanna run up and kiss you, but mama i only jsut missed you

by an inch it made them all flinch

i tried to run, but the sun burned me down, right to the ground
all for the week i tried to get you to speak, but nothing came out,it was as silent as a mouse,in this dead house.

i have nothign left in me, i wish they could see. that what is left will make them them regret the frets on this guitar, because im going hard
i tried. i failed. you wailed. i fall. you crawl. to me. they see. what was left. nothing anymore.

in the end we lost the fight.
someone had to go and pull a knife.
the other side had a gun.
i couldnt run, for the fear, in me, made me see, that there was nothign left inside
they all critisized, who i am, i am dan, i will stand, above no other can adore
that the facts are on the floor.

overall, we all fall
no more standing, no more fighting, for the light was blinding, it made me wish that i could only see you one more time
the verse and the rhym couldnt save you,, in fact,, it made me fail you
even harder i fall, i no longer stand tall.
i wish that you and me mama, could be together foreva, whatever the weatha
but that cant happen

the whole world is a clapping

becuase they think that this is a show, this is real, i can only speel and spit for so long until my lungs are all gone

i wish you could sit and sing along to this song, but baby, you are gone.

that was hella strong
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just came up with that in about half an hour writing it as it came to my head.
any thoughts? bad, good, average?
first song ive every wrote
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