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RikGrimesIsDead 11-21-2016 09:11 AM

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TATTOOED TEARS

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
All this pain and all these fears
From now on i dont see hope
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Walking around my head is hanging down
I wear the crown…
For being the biggest piece of **** i ever knew
For thinking about myself
Thinking about myself and never you
But i promise from now on there aint no fears
Time to rid myself these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears


Every time i try to better things between us
Something always derails the good
You never back me up,You never understood
That all i ever do is for you
And to be there for you for years and years
Instead im wearing these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears


Written by David Smith

RikGrimesIsDead 11-21-2016 06:18 PM

I'm falling
 
I’M FALLING


(CHORUS)

Cause baby…..I'm falling…..I'm falling down so hard
Baby I’m calling
For help to fight this fight and hold me through the night
And never leave meeeeee
Cause baby I’m falling.

Against the cage as blows rain down upon me
Blood on my face black and blue from the beating
I can’t feel the pain anymore
Its just the way I’m feeling

(CHORUS)

I have a battle with life … oh baby its winning
Since the day you left my heads a mess and I’m quitting
I don’t want to see the light of day cause i really don’t deserve it
It will only be filled with pain
Cause baby you aint in it

I see this gun and think to myself…pull the triggerrrrr
Don't understand why people still point the fingerrrrr
Cause they don’t know me and they don’t know us
The things we went through
The way i love you

(CHORUS)

Tired of feeling alone, empty and broken
Eyes feeling heavy as i inhale the smoke in
Can’t rid this feeling of hurt and despair
Especially with the words I’m hearing
Cause i know its the haze putting my head in a daze
Makes me hurting…

(CHORUS)

I’m falling (x5)
Help me fight this fight
I’m calling (x5)
Hold me through the night

Hold me through the night…. cause baby I’m falling

Zhanteimi 11-21-2016 06:21 PM

"inhale the smoke in" is redundant.

Onlymac 11-23-2016 08:00 AM

Intriguing....
Would be nice to hear it to music. Maybe you could find a existing instrumental piece to sing it to to get an idea of how it may sound.. Just a thought.

RikGrimesIsDead 11-23-2016 12:53 PM

I wanna dance with you
 
Hi peeps,
this effort is an upbeat song,imagine a calvin harris/james arthur collab?
about a girl who just makes you happy and makes you want to dance....

YOU MAKE ME WANT TO DANCE



(CHORUS)

you make me wanna dance all night to the sound of this beat with youuuuuu
look in your eyes and spin you around
fall into laughter as we hit the ground
stand up and dance all night with youuuuu


I wanna dance with you,cause baby you make my legs go crazy when you smile
and in my smoke cloud I’m so hazy,the music making me so spacey thinking about youuuuuuuuu
(thinking about youuuuuu)
(cause baby i missed you)

you make my toes curl
the minute you arrive home late from work
cause here is …….my girl
a minute longer go bezerk

(CHORUS)

cause darling i missed you and your walk
the firery attitude when you talk
i love everything about you…..
i love everything you do ……..
the way you dance your troubles away
you make the haters want to stay
with just a glance
you make me want to dance..you make me want to dance

RikGrimesIsDead 11-23-2016 12:59 PM

Tattooed tears
 
Hey peeps,
this about self doubt and not seeing a way out of feeling down and trying to rid myself of the feeling,based on past experiences......

TATTOOED TEARS


(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
All this pain and all these fears
From now on i dont see no hope
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Walking around my head is hanging down
I wear the crown…
For being the biggest piece of **** i ever knew
For thinking about myself
Thinking about myself and never you
But i promise from now on there aint no fears
Time to rid myself these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears


Every time i try to better things between us
Something always derails the good
You never back me up,You never understood
That all i ever do is for you
And to be there for you for years and years
Instead im wearing these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Zhanteimi 11-23-2016 02:28 PM

Tattooing a tear on your face might seem like a good idea in the midst of heartbreak after a nasty breakup, but I advise you wait to make that decision until you're calm.

Zhanteimi 11-23-2016 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RikGrimesIsDead (Post 1771851)
you make my legs go crazy when you smile

This lyric just seems weird to me.

You: Hey, baby.
She: *smiles*
You: *starts Riverdancing*

Janszoon 11-23-2016 02:39 PM

I was picturing it more like this:

http://i.giphy.com/qjz7Tqi6bqEEg.gif

Ol’ Qwerty Bastard 11-23-2016 02:55 PM

If you want to get her back then the better idea would be to tattoo her name on your face.


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