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RikGrimesIsDead 11-21-2016 09:11 AM

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TATTOOED TEARS

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
All this pain and all these fears
From now on i dont see hope
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Walking around my head is hanging down
I wear the crown…
For being the biggest piece of **** i ever knew
For thinking about myself
Thinking about myself and never you
But i promise from now on there aint no fears
Time to rid myself these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears


Every time i try to better things between us
Something always derails the good
You never back me up,You never understood
That all i ever do is for you
And to be there for you for years and years
Instead im wearing these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears


Written by David Smith

RikGrimesIsDead 11-21-2016 06:18 PM

I'm falling
 
I’M FALLING


(CHORUS)

Cause baby…..I'm falling…..I'm falling down so hard
Baby I’m calling
For help to fight this fight and hold me through the night
And never leave meeeeee
Cause baby I’m falling.

Against the cage as blows rain down upon me
Blood on my face black and blue from the beating
I can’t feel the pain anymore
Its just the way I’m feeling

(CHORUS)

I have a battle with life … oh baby its winning
Since the day you left my heads a mess and I’m quitting
I don’t want to see the light of day cause i really don’t deserve it
It will only be filled with pain
Cause baby you aint in it

I see this gun and think to myself…pull the triggerrrrr
Don't understand why people still point the fingerrrrr
Cause they don’t know me and they don’t know us
The things we went through
The way i love you

(CHORUS)

Tired of feeling alone, empty and broken
Eyes feeling heavy as i inhale the smoke in
Can’t rid this feeling of hurt and despair
Especially with the words I’m hearing
Cause i know its the haze putting my head in a daze
Makes me hurting…

(CHORUS)

I’m falling (x5)
Help me fight this fight
I’m calling (x5)
Hold me through the night

Hold me through the night…. cause baby I’m falling

Zhanteimi 11-21-2016 06:21 PM

"inhale the smoke in" is redundant.

Onlymac 11-23-2016 08:00 AM

Intriguing....
Would be nice to hear it to music. Maybe you could find a existing instrumental piece to sing it to to get an idea of how it may sound.. Just a thought.

RikGrimesIsDead 11-23-2016 12:53 PM

I wanna dance with you
 
Hi peeps,
this effort is an upbeat song,imagine a calvin harris/james arthur collab?
about a girl who just makes you happy and makes you want to dance....

YOU MAKE ME WANT TO DANCE



(CHORUS)

you make me wanna dance all night to the sound of this beat with youuuuuu
look in your eyes and spin you around
fall into laughter as we hit the ground
stand up and dance all night with youuuuu


I wanna dance with you,cause baby you make my legs go crazy when you smile
and in my smoke cloud I’m so hazy,the music making me so spacey thinking about youuuuuuuuu
(thinking about youuuuuu)
(cause baby i missed you)

you make my toes curl
the minute you arrive home late from work
cause here is …….my girl
a minute longer go bezerk

(CHORUS)

cause darling i missed you and your walk
the firery attitude when you talk
i love everything about you…..
i love everything you do ……..
the way you dance your troubles away
you make the haters want to stay
with just a glance
you make me want to dance..you make me want to dance

RikGrimesIsDead 11-23-2016 12:59 PM

Tattooed tears
 
Hey peeps,
this about self doubt and not seeing a way out of feeling down and trying to rid myself of the feeling,based on past experiences......

TATTOOED TEARS


(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
All this pain and all these fears
From now on i dont see no hope
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Walking around my head is hanging down
I wear the crown…
For being the biggest piece of **** i ever knew
For thinking about myself
Thinking about myself and never you
But i promise from now on there aint no fears
Time to rid myself these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears


Every time i try to better things between us
Something always derails the good
You never back me up,You never understood
That all i ever do is for you
And to be there for you for years and years
Instead im wearing these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Zhanteimi 11-23-2016 02:28 PM

Tattooing a tear on your face might seem like a good idea in the midst of heartbreak after a nasty breakup, but I advise you wait to make that decision until you're calm.

Zhanteimi 11-23-2016 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RikGrimesIsDead (Post 1771851)
you make my legs go crazy when you smile

This lyric just seems weird to me.

You: Hey, baby.
She: *smiles*
You: *starts Riverdancing*

Janszoon 11-23-2016 02:39 PM

I was picturing it more like this:

http://i.giphy.com/qjz7Tqi6bqEEg.gif

Ol’ Qwerty Bastard 11-23-2016 02:55 PM

If you want to get her back then the better idea would be to tattoo her name on your face.

Blank. 11-23-2016 02:58 PM

Tear drops tattooed on is suppose to mean you went to prison... So are you saying that being with her is like being in prison?

Ol’ Qwerty Bastard 11-23-2016 03:05 PM

Your mom went to prison

RikGrimesIsDead 11-23-2016 08:03 PM

:) :)

RikGrimesIsDead 11-23-2016 08:06 PM

its as if you think i actually have tattooed tears on my face??!!!
hmmmmm.....

Blank. 11-23-2016 11:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RikGrimesIsDead (Post 1771991)
its as if you think i actually have tattooed tears on my face??!!!
hmmmmm.....

I don't think you have tattoo tears on your face. I just think your a shitty poet.

Lucem Ferre 11-24-2016 12:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1blankmind (Post 1772016)
I don't think you have tattoo tears on your face. I just think your a shitty poet.

Don't worry, Grimes, BlankMind is the fakest 'engineer' on the planet.

Blank. 11-24-2016 12:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lucem Ferre (Post 1772047)
Don't worry, Grimes, BlankMind is the fakest 'engineer' on the planet.

Who said I was an engineer?

Lucem Ferre 11-24-2016 12:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1blankmind (Post 1772050)
Who said I was an engineer?

You told me you drive trains.

Zhanteimi 11-24-2016 01:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1blankmind (Post 1772016)
I just think your a shitty poet.

*you're

ffs

Ol’ Qwerty Bastard 11-24-2016 08:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1blankmind (Post 1772016)
I don't think you have tattoo tears on your face. I just think your a shitty poet.

You're a ****ty poet.

Frownland 11-24-2016 08:51 AM

*yer

Ol’ Qwerty Bastard 11-24-2016 08:52 AM

ur'e

Blank. 11-24-2016 11:08 AM

Jesus Christ! You guys obsess over such retarded ****. Get a life. Seriously.

Ol’ Qwerty Bastard 11-24-2016 11:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1blankmind (Post 1772148)
Jesus Christ! You guys obsess over such retarded ****. Get a life. Seriously.

Grammar is indeed retarded ****. I promise you that knowing the difference between you're and your will never come in handy.

The Batlord 11-24-2016 11:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1blankmind (Post 1772148)
Jesus Christ! You guys obsess over such retarded ****. Get a life. Seriously.

http://www.musicbanter.com/avatars/1...ine=1475194800

RikGrimesIsDead 11-24-2016 02:04 PM

who sorry? ;) lucem

Thelonious Monkey 11-24-2016 02:14 PM

I hope your name is a joke, or you've just ruined The Walking Dead for me.

RikGrimesIsDead 11-25-2016 08:41 AM

:) :) youre safe......

The Batlord 11-25-2016 11:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by _Violet_ (Post 1772210)
I hope your name is a joke, or you've just ruined The Walking Dead for me.

Snape kills Dumbledore.

RikGrimesIsDead 11-25-2016 04:24 PM

Kryptonite
 
KRYPTONITE


(CHORUS)

I see those big green eyes sparkling bright
My kryptonite
And those superpowers that you use against me
I try to fight…
Your kryptonite,your kryptonite


(V1)

You use your words just like a sword
Cuts down deep within
Using that green disguise
To drop down my guard and let you in
I told you about what happened before with her
And didnt expect you to use that AGAIN against me
I didnt expect that text to be there…..was my

MY KRYPTONITE,MY KRYPTONITE

(CHORUS)

I see those big green eyes sparkling bright
My kryptonite
And those superpowers that you use against me
I try to fight…
Your kryptonite,your kryptonite

You cut me deep deep down (x2)

Till i hit the ground

MY KRYPTONITE

(V2)

Every time i think im winning
You swoop down and send me spinning
I cannot fight you with powers or with words i speak
Your kryptonite making me weak
These boots and cape are all a con
Im nothing when i take you on

KILLING ME WITH YOUR KRYPTONITE

(CHORUS)

I see those big green eyes sparkling bright
My kryptonite
And those superpowers that you use against me
I try to fight…
Your kryptonite,your kryptonite

(V3)

After the battle was lost i decided to turn
The dark side appealed to me
No more mr nice guy,its time that i was free
Loose from these green shackles of pain


You cut me deep deep down (x2)

But i got up off the ground

NO MORE KRYPTONITE….NO MORE KRYPTONITE


written by david smith

Blank. 11-25-2016 04:32 PM


RikGrimesIsDead 11-25-2016 04:45 PM

and?

grindy 11-25-2016 08:36 PM

Merged.

See rules:
http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...e-posting.html

Zhanteimi 11-26-2016 03:28 AM

So, is it Superman or Star Wars?

RikGrimesIsDead 11-26-2016 04:14 PM

you f****d it (warning)
 
Snowflakes hitting my face
Icy winds fallen grace
Jingle bells,everyone happy
Rest my head near a dirty nappy
Used needles,empty bags of coke
No jingle bells this year
My life’s a joke

See i messed up,one mistake
that one mistake brought all the hate
to my door,piling up to the third floor
no questions just hate
no sympathy just people looking irate
see you don’t know
this is my life it aint a show

Now don’t get me wrong i aint saying its fine
i am no angel but lets draw the line
when I’m getting abuse in the street
its not fair and we need to meet
to sort s**t
cause I’m not taking it
time to stand up and make s**t greater
get away from the little boy hater

Im better than you
i aint lying you know its true
your a joker,pathetic no hoper
and ill take you to school on this mic
ill say some s**t you will not like
but its coming….
words that will make you go running
cause your a fake
low life liar,a dirty snake

Im angry you think s**t
and dont even say s**t
go run and text s**t
hide behind your self s**t
and now im done with it
and this aint me you did it
being a sneak
lying to my face week after week


ill be the one laughing when im sorted and happy
and youll be lonely and feeling crappy
caused you f***ed it all up
and when i see you in the street there wont be a... what’s up
and i wont even care
for all i know its a stranger there

you f***ed this
now don’t go running your mouth to chris
cause he tells me
every little f***ing thing you got to say about me
so just go just go anywhere i dont know
but just be gone
or there will be a spot in the cemetary
room for one


written by david smith

Zhanteimi 11-26-2016 04:22 PM

Quote:

Rest my head near a dirty nappy
Ew.

The Batlord 11-26-2016 04:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mordwyr (Post 1773068)
Ew.

You've been in Japan too long.

Zhanteimi 11-26-2016 04:37 PM

Yes. I flatter myself that I live in a land where we don't sleep near soiled diapers.

Frownland 11-26-2016 04:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mordwyr (Post 1773078)
Yes. I flatter myself that I live in a land where we don't sleep near soiled diapers.

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Batlord (Post 1773077)
You've been in Japan too long.

.

Zhanteimi 11-26-2016 04:38 PM

Lol


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