Are These Lyrics Legit???

**Scarlett O'Hara** · 05-27-2014, 09:34 PM

I think it was better than the first song. I think it's not so much about vocabulary but making a song interesting and unique.

ladyislingering · 05-27-2014, 09:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Darkenevils

Fall to doom

Never again
Will I taste thy bitter thy bitter
To this day

"Hold this seed"

Never again
Will I fall-for-the green afro that grows below this dirt

"burn this seed"

(I will hold my breath)

For the once
Too undeadly vegetable feed this
Madness

Cooking, but I can't feel my bones
My skin craving
From the stinking smell

But I wont give up my life
I wont give up my life
"At all"
(At all)
"At all"

Screw this
You drain me into my madness
But I can feel it growing be-neath
Feeding of the rain
Ask I bite

(Hold me down)

The last time
This is not what I asked too
The tastelessly un favor

Is vegetable
Is vegetable

This makes me sick
You make me sick

hate me now

Fcck

I might update them asoon as I get recording

this is the most glorious thing I've ever seen

Psy-Fi · 05-28-2014, 07:52 AM

I'm really digging this one!

Especially that part about the green afro.

Poetic.

Darkenevlls · 05-29-2014, 05:32 PM

I mean is us who wear the crown **** the jelly administrational admin here something I made and btw no one else but me has the growls of asking alexandria dare to compare and im not using auto tune this is my real voice

no self promotion please - mod

05-27-2014, 09:34 PM	#21 (permalink)
Scarlett O'Hara Make it so Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 6,181	I think it was better than the first song. I think it's not so much about vocabulary but making a song interesting and unique. __________________ "Elph is truly an enfant terrible of the forum, bless and curse him" - Marie, Queen of Thots

05-29-2014, 05:32 PM	#24 (permalink)
Darkenevlls Groupie Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 1	Are These Lyrics Legit??? I mean is us who wear the crown **** the jelly administrational admin here something I made and btw no one else but me has the growls of asking alexandria dare to compare and im not using auto tune this is my real voice no self promotion please - mod