Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-05-2008, 09:42 AM
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I normally go for the more obtuse/ abstract...
I normally go for the more obtuse/ abstract lyrics, but this has specific details that could be misinterpreted pretty severely.
Regardless, it's innovative and personal enough that I could like it...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
11-30-2007, 10:05 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,428
It's kind of rough to tell how lyrical the...
It's kind of rough to tell how lyrical the flowiness of the lyrics sound by just reading them, a person can flowy out syllables any number of ways.
If you could only write two lines to say...
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Forum: The Lounge
11-30-2007, 03:10 PM
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Replies: 48
Views: 7,968
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Forum: The Lounge
11-30-2007, 03:01 PM
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Replies: 48
Views: 7,968
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Forum: The Lounge
11-30-2007, 12:41 AM
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Replies: 48
Views: 7,968
I guess this as close as there is to an...
I guess this as close as there is to an argument...but I could care less about a ban, or no. It's the hypocrisy of it all that pisses me off.
1.) It's the smell and not the health issue:
I...
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Forum: The Lounge
11-30-2007, 12:23 AM
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Replies: 48
Views: 7,968
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-23-2007, 04:15 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 1,829
Kara-van
I like
your hand
when it moves across the table top
If god
were real and needed a rib
to make you for me I'd let god take it
with
a
sledgehammer
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-23-2007, 04:10 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 535
Uhmm... The sentiment is kind of a slanted...
Uhmm... The sentiment is kind of a slanted argument. It's either Home (security, a cage) or Free (Streetwalking, degradation), which doesn't convince that you know enough about either to persuade me...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-23-2007, 03:15 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,960
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-16-2007, 01:05 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,960
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-06-2007, 05:05 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,960
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Forum: The Lounge
03-20-2007, 01:16 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,392
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Forum: The Lounge
03-19-2007, 10:17 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,392
The idea, the hope of expanding personal...
The idea, the hope of expanding personal experience beyond what's available in the horrible ordinary everydays, the rejecting the elements of enculturaion, isn't a bad place to write.
This piece...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-06-2007, 09:21 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 7,289
Some firewall/ security software will prevent...
Some firewall/ security software will prevent sending files. Are they Word attachments, or image files?
It'd be really nice to see and I really appreciate your effort. I tried to convert a story...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-05-2007, 09:25 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 7,289
Exactly, I remember one thing that made a fair...
Exactly, I remember one thing that made a fair impression on me from Alfred Adler about 'self-ideal.' Pretty much trying to fix your past is only going to provide a negligible benefit in a best case...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-05-2007, 09:04 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 1,159
Canned Music
Normally, I don't write lyrics down. Either the song stays or it doesn't, but here are some select lines from an improv jam last night. I was thinking about pushing the cart around grocery shopping...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-04-2007, 05:03 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 7,289
I just got around to reading your reply , then...
I just got around to reading your reply , then all the following replies...
I'm still kind of dazed from going out last night (and it's almost 4 p.m. now (dehydrated, mostly)) and I am going to...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-01-2007, 09:13 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 7,289
Read through parts of the novel, it's way too...
Read through parts of the novel, it's way too rough not to clean up, but there are maybe two chapters total I could send with disclaimers, I'll send one Saturday. I really doubt I'll go back and...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-27-2007, 07:51 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 7,289
An itchy beard woke me up early, had to get up...
An itchy beard woke me up early, had to get up and shave. I was really starting to look quite the hick, it'd been like three weeks. But I'm going to nap now, well try, right up till I have to leave...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-27-2007, 07:17 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 7,289
Well thanks for reading them, I wrote them as...
Well thanks for reading them, I wrote them as part of a Writer's Group that quickly became a Drinking Group. I'd just flail out some little attempt at a story like the day before. There were a couple...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-27-2007, 06:44 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,960
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-26-2007, 09:49 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 7,289
Those are real short, but it was pretty...
Those are real short, but it was pretty frustrating to realize I no longer had the WordPerfect program installed on the laptop. Had to download AbiWord on to the Mac and convert to Word in order to...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-25-2007, 10:19 PM
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Replies: 56
Views: 7,289
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-25-2007, 03:07 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 1,593
I've made several attempts at a reply to this,...
I've made several attempts at a reply to this, but they keep getting jumbled and confused. I think the main reason they do is because there's the one side of me that feels there's this hope in the...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
02-25-2007, 01:54 AM
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Replies: 56
Views: 7,289
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