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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-26-2010, 05:01 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 3,784
Posted By What'sNext?
Keep writing. Always keep writing. It may be bad,...

Keep writing. Always keep writing. It may be bad, but don't stop. For me, it always helps to keep writing, even if it's crap.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-23-2010, 04:37 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,075
Posted By What'sNext?
I really like inside out a lot. I aslo like...

I really like inside out a lot. I aslo like magic box, but there's something about that kind of bugs me. I'm not really sure what. It might be that it's a little too random for me. BUT that's just...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-12-2010, 05:04 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
Thanks for your advice. I've been working on it...

Thanks for your advice. I've been working on it and I think it's gotten a lot better. Maybe I'll post the new version in a little while. You're definitely right. Just writing helps.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-26-2010, 11:52 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
Boy, did that smiley ever not work! XD :jailed:

Boy, did that smiley ever not work! XD
:jailed:
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-26-2010, 11:51 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
You're right. The relationship IS simple....

You're right. The relationship IS simple. Actually, it's not even a relationship, he just likes her and wants to dedicate this song to her. That and the fact that we're 13 makes it a bit hard for him...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-25-2010, 03:03 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
A song my friend wrote

Hey. Our rhythm guitarist wrote this song. I thought it was REALLY cliche. Can you help me help him make it better please? He's got a great riff and I don't want to ruin it with these lyrics. Thanks....
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-22-2010, 06:04 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,827
Posted By What'sNext?
Sorry. Maybe this "Earl" you talk about could be...

Sorry. Maybe this "Earl" you talk about could be your teacher.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-19-2010, 12:52 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,827
Posted By What'sNext?
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-16-2010, 02:33 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,075
Posted By What'sNext?
I like the change you've made to the Political...

I like the change you've made to the Political Statement Song, t3hplatyz0rz was right, it works much better without rhyming with suck.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-12-2010, 12:37 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,075
Posted By What'sNext?
In the city.

In the city.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-11-2010, 12:29 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
Thanks for that suggestion. I'm dead serious. I...

Thanks for that suggestion. I'm dead serious. I couldn't think of a way to end a song so I turned the girl into a ninja who kills her boyfriend. No joke.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2010, 05:32 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,075
Posted By What'sNext?
I like the first few verse the best. The rest is...

I like the first few verse the best. The rest is good, too, but the first section was a little better.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2010, 05:26 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
I know that it's a weird song, but it sound good...

I know that it's a weird song, but it sound good when our band plays it. I just need to finish up the lyrics and name it. Any suggestions?

Verse 1:
You know that it's sad when you're feeling...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-26-2010, 06:12 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
I don't have a name for this one either. It seems...

I don't have a name for this one either. It seems kind of stupid without a melody, but I still like this one.

I know there's something goin' on
I sing you song after songs after song
At the end...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-26-2010, 06:06 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
I don't have a title or second verse for this...

I don't have a title or second verse for this yet. Also, the chorus is a bit week. Any suggestion would be appreciated.

Verse:
She grabs her coat
She slaps my face
I'm taking too long
Coming...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-25-2010, 09:58 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
Oops. Typo. It's supposed to be "What you think...

Oops. Typo. It's supposed to be "What you think you see is sheer craziness it's just as well..." :) Thanks for catching that. And ya, I want to make it longer. There's also some instrumental stuff in...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-25-2010, 09:50 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,509
Posted By What'sNext?
What'sNext's Songs

I've been writing songs for a while now, and this one isn't the best, I know. It has some week spots and I'd love any suggestions on how it can be improved. Thanks for your time. :)

The songs...
Forum: General Music 01-24-2010, 06:52 PM
Replies: 132
Views: 14,534
Posted By What'sNext?
I don't think most people would care. Lady GaGa...

I don't think most people would care. Lady GaGa doesn't even use real words. The Beatles used to record second versions of songs in German so that people would listen to them. It didn't take them...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-23-2010, 06:21 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,075
Posted By What'sNext?
I really really like School. Nice rhyming. It...

I really really like School. Nice rhyming. It doesn't sound like you have to force the lyrics to fit. I like that a lot. The only little part is a line that you mentioned had already been done. The...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-23-2010, 05:53 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,075
Posted By What'sNext?
Hey I was actually trying to hint to you that you...

Hey I was actually trying to hint to you that you know me. Turn up the heat was a hint. So was the "you might even be a drummer". Guess who? If you haven't figured it out, I'm your lead singer.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-23-2010, 12:52 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 5,539
Posted By What'sNext?
Wink In my opinion, it's only so-so, but your writing...

In my opinion, it's only so-so, but your writing will get better in time. Maybe next time you could think of something a little more...meaningful. But don't get me wrong! This has great potential....
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-23-2010, 11:19 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 3,075
Posted By What'sNext?
Most of it is pretty good, but here are a few...

Most of it is pretty good, but here are a few parts like "Purpling Jellybean" that sound cool on paper but would probably be hard for a singer to sing without getting all jumbled up. I don't know if...
Forum: General Music 01-23-2010, 08:16 AM
Replies: 144
Views: 16,004
Posted By What'sNext?
My first concert was probably the Barra Macneils...

My first concert was probably the Barra Macneils or the the Lapointes.
My best concerts where
- Blue Man Group
- Neil Young
- Newsboys
Forum: General Music 01-23-2010, 08:12 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 9,118
Posted By What'sNext?
I have no problem with MEDICAL drugs. It's when...

I have no problem with MEDICAL drugs. It's when people abuse them that their lives often start to suck.

I have no problem with sex, it's just that I don't believe in sex before marriage.

I...
Forum: General Music 01-23-2010, 08:02 AM
Replies: 472
Views: 43,823
Posted By What'sNext?
I say the man who ruined Let It Be. What kind of...

I say the man who ruined Let It Be. What kind of idiot takes the Beatles album with a no-overdub rule and ads choirs and orchestras. Phil Spector does.
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