Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-14-2010, 04:03 AM
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Replies: 13
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artificial hibernation.
droperidol, it cures it all,
when you are high
it makes you small,
if you are worried, or talk too much
droperidol comes after lunch,
it lets us move you
from chair to chair,
it keeps you out...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-23-2010, 09:43 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-06-2010, 02:43 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
the stars have fallen from the skies
someone...
the stars have fallen from the skies
someone shook the night too hard,
the stars they smashed apon the ground
what will the dreamers gaze at now?
and the roses now
only cut my skin,
and my...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-01-2010, 12:02 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-27-2010, 02:47 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 757
hi darkwhite,
this is quite an epic, a real...
hi darkwhite,
this is quite an epic, a real long tale. i hear it as a country number? long sprawling song like johnny cash or a young dylan would enjoy playing with the verses, simple guitar, slow...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-22-2010, 10:11 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
one last swim
the whispering sea calls out to me
come shelter in my sanctuary,
tonight i'll swim beneath dark skies
when i grow tired
death is my prize,
i feel the lights behind me fade
but i won't stop my...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-11-2010, 07:27 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
growing up to be
little joey wants to be
a fighting hero in the army,
he was given
a plastic gun today,
he smiled and blew his mum and dad away,
anne-marie she wants to
be a nurse,
and help you,
she'll work...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-05-2010, 03:11 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
no more midnight men
i was concieved against a wall
****ing followed alcohol,
five furious minutes
out in the cold,
he paid his money
your **** was sold.
chorus.
jesus,
please us,
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-04-2010, 11:49 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 978
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-25-2010, 02:06 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 982
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-25-2010, 01:58 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
song/poem
My old man he kisses girls,
And my old dear she swallows pills,
And you ask me what’s wrong tonight,
Will you come over and stay by my side,
You take my hand and you say to me,
Will you read...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-21-2010, 05:19 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
i heard you crying
any thoughts on these lyrics? cheers
when i passed by your window
i heard you crying,
your lover had left you
and now you are dying,
in the dark
i can hear you,
and i long to be near you,...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-21-2010, 05:08 PM
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Replies: 68
Views: 11,873
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-20-2010, 04:09 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
hi vegangelika,tea supremacist. thanks for...
hi vegangelika,tea supremacist. thanks for replies. you are spot on vegangelica. it is all about manipulation, how easy it is to lie. mary, because someone older has said so, will believe, wants to...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-15-2010, 05:17 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,905
god he lived at no 34.
hello, this is my first post, i have been on other forums but would like any views on this song please, it's a heavy subject but i've written it in what i think is a simple poppy way? that's the way...
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