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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry

10-26-2007, 12:10 PM

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Crowe's Songwriting Collection

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Posted By The Dave

^Sounds much better, again, good job :).

^Sounds much better, again, good job :).

Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry

10-23-2007, 11:24 AM

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Crowe's Songwriting Collection

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Posted By The Dave

I liked it, it wasn't anything too complicated...

I liked it, it wasn't anything too complicated but it had a very simplistic beauty about it. I kinda agree with what KL said about the last line, but overall it's a good piece.

Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry

09-05-2007, 08:42 AM

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Crowe's Songwriting Collection

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Posted By The Dave

^I don't know about that, I wouldn't say that it...

^I don't know about that, I wouldn't say that it sounds better either way.

Also, typo: Looks sadly as me as his breathing slows...
I'm guessing you meant to put 'sadly at me.'

But this part...

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