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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry

12-12-2007, 10:15 AM

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Tell me that practising has at least slightly improved my writing

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Posted By moonage-t

hmm I wanted to keep the last line as I wanted to...

hmm I wanted to keep the last line as I wanted to make it clear that calling the girl's voice had little impact even before the protagonist's voice had died.

Like, the "worked even less than it...

Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry

12-12-2007, 09:22 AM

Replies: 7

Tell me that practising has at least slightly improved my writing

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Posted By moonage-t

thanks very much for the comments, the last part...

thanks very much for the comments, the last part was something that's been swimming around in my head for a while but I keep struggling to represent it well in the form of lyrics

Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry

12-11-2007, 08:17 PM

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Tell me that practising has at least slightly improved my writing

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Posted By moonage-t

Tell me that practising has at least slightly improved my writing

why do you tell me that you're so alone?
As if I'm not here at all
It's not within my reach to overthrow the queen
because my hands are always tied to your bedpost
every night we breathe into our...

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