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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-12-2007, 10:50 AM
Replies: 7
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Posted By Dizzys in the wolf
^_^ you could run it over the top with a nice...

^_^ you could run it over the top with a nice harmony.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-12-2007, 10:01 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,346
Posted By Dizzys in the wolf
but the worst thing of all was when my voice...

but the worst thing of all
was when my voice croaked and died
and calling your name
worked even less than it used to.

Calling your name/With a dead voice/So ineffective/It didn't make a noise...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-12-2007, 07:47 AM
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Views: 1,346
Posted By Dizzys in the wolf
I think this is a great improvement from your...

I think this is a great improvement from your last piece you put up here. I love the imagery you've used with the bedpost and all that. I think the last part is weaker than the rest of it, its a good...
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