Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-30-2006, 03:41 AM
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Replies: 6
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-30-2006, 03:18 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 1,334
I think you've got something with a bit of...
I think you've got something with a bit of tweaking it could be good.
The subject, in general is just way too vague. Try going more indepth in on it ya know? You could be a little more descriptive...
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