Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
09-28-2009, 05:55 PM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-14-2009, 11:09 AM
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I really like it, it is strongly written.
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I really like it, it is strongly written.
BUT
If the grammar and punctuation were added, it would be more defined.
And when you actually mention the substance abuse, it kind of takes way the...
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