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Old 09-24-2008, 05:24 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Chard's Songwriting Journal

i see you searching high and low
youve got 2 speed up lifes 2 slow
be ocean minded lift your spirit high
go out enjoy life never say die

get your body into a rythum
only you know what you can achieve
im busy strummin-set your mind at ease
look at your life as though it was a dance
now get out onto the dance floor take a chance

dont be alarmed its not an illusion
step out of this world of confusion
hardluck people everywhere
living their lives in silent despair

for 2mor is a new day
it hasnt been written yet
go out with a smile
what ever you need im sure your get...chorus

be ocean minded lift your spirit high
go out enjoy life never say die.

Last edited by chard; 02-12-2009 at 08:49 AM.
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Old 09-24-2008, 06:00 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Smile 4ever yours

red is the colour of passion
and passion ive got for you
a heart made of roses
wrapped in a ribbon or 2
the colour of the roses are yellow and white
representing love all 4 you my beautiful wife.

when i awake in the morning and your lying next 2 me
heaven is a place on earth you help me see
never thought id feel like this
i do every time we hug and kiss

2gether 4everno matter where we are
2gether 4ever your my bright shining star,,,,,,

your smile so warm
your heart so kind
i come in from a storm
when im out of my mind
you bless me with peace and fulfilling love
the power in you surley from the heavens above

2gether 4ever death do us part
2gether 4ever youl always have my heart

holding your hand in mine
the sun always seems to shine
staring into your eyes
couldnt ever say goodbye
you are like nothing ive ever known
now ive met you il never be alone
you could brighten up the darkest day
wouldnt matter what ud do or say

2gether 4ever no matter where you are
2gether 4ever your my bright shining star.

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Old 02-13-2009, 11:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Default Catchy ay?

in my mind im drowning
though im on solid ground
my heart is pounding
as i fall further down

trying to make sense of it all
still, not getting very far
wheres my optimism gone
wheres my bright shining star

im in a dark dark place
my world is closing in on me
is this my fate
is this my destiny
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Old 02-13-2009, 11:07 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Very generic. Sorry bro.
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Old 02-13-2009, 10:10 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Cheesy generic nu-metal shite lyrics. This theme's been done before.
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Old 02-13-2009, 10:31 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Did you take this off of a [insert nu-metal band here] track? Cuz it sounds really familiar...
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Old 02-16-2009, 05:43 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Default paradise

when your in need-trouble deep
whos the 1 that helps you sleep
im standing on a platform gazing up in2 the sky
waiting for a train 2 take me 2 paradise

most of us can keep our heads above water
while others are lead 2 the slaughter
could it be a gene passed down from generation
or is it the time of tribulation

life can be tough in all sorts of places
it can fall upon u at anytime
your comfort zone can be crashed n burned
and all your so-called friends turn their backs on you

my train hasnt arrived yet il stand here til it does
ive been patient before now in the name of love
theres a key to be found in society
keep in check with reality

when your in need-trouble deep
have you someone special that helps you sleep.
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Old 02-17-2009, 01:54 AM   #8 (permalink)
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its an original but thankyou means im getting there cheers.

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Very generic. Sorry bro.
thankyou its so hard these days to meet a fellow professional like myself lol.
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Old 02-17-2009, 11:30 AM   #9 (permalink)
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the whole world is going up in flames
cant say i know whos to blame
back stabbing is rife through the ranks
the man at the bottom whispers thanks
the man up the top with his glass full
is counting his cash while talking bull
power given to a small man will corrupt his little head
and every one close to him will end up poor or dead
hows this possible in this day and age
everybody knows whats written on the next page
how can the people prevent this from happening again
may be we could vote for someone who is actually sane
have you ever seen a sinking ship
with a whole nation screaming on it
knowing they are all going down
know one to save them there all going to drown
its all out there ready to be taken
mans progress the technological age
in all its faults it should not be mistaken
for another begotten page
every colour hits my eyes
the shapes and the sketches
paint flows from my brush
an instant million it fetches
find your way or be left behind searching for a clean nappy
the sun doesnt always shine only those who are truly happy.
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Old 02-17-2009, 12:20 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Default stoned

tears falling down my face
so hard being a part of the human race
have no home im in a strange place
a very long journey to fast a pace

cant decide on where to go
disabling me got me down low
pain n suffering sure to folloe
all these years alive with nout to show

out of my head sick of this
my life turns n twists
out of my head all this crap
feel like im falling without a saftey strap

nomore sunshine nomore joy
had so many play me like a toy
giving up my will to live
death is a blessing nomore to give

now all my blood rushing to my head
wrists cut blood all over the bed
goodbye today no more tomorrows
goodbye to all my sorrows

now im cold stoned dead on my bed
covered in my favourite colour red.
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