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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-12-2009, 04:36 PM
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Posted By Freebase Dali
Um....

Um....
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-11-2009, 07:02 PM
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Posted By Freebase Dali
Ok let's look at navigating the English language...

Ok let's look at navigating the English language as a first priority:

"What I have not got" should be changed to "What I have not".
"depts" = "debt"
I have no idea what "arrears" means.......
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-11-2009, 06:56 PM
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Posted By Freebase Dali
I really don't want to be critical, but this...

I really don't want to be critical, but this isn't good on any level I can think of.

I want to believe in what you're saying, but your concept jumps around faster than I can contemplate a meaning...
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