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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 10-10-2010, 12:34 PM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Stone Birds, I really enjoyed the beautiful...

Stone Birds,

I really enjoyed the beautiful piano and delicate drumming at the beginning of your song. Lovely, really.

I recommend that instead of adding more layers of vocals, you actually...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-25-2010, 08:14 AM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Stone Birds, I like the main idea of the song. ...

Stone Birds, I like the main idea of the song.

One recommendation I have is for the vocals. It sounds like you have used your voice in chorus/harmony throughout the song. Have you considered...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-25-2010, 04:50 PM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Oh! That's interesting, Stone Birds...I couldn't...

Oh! That's interesting, Stone Birds...I couldn't tell that your song was improvised. I am impressed that the song hung together as well as it did given that you were making up the lyrics as you...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-25-2010, 05:53 AM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
I love them, too! Though I probably love hidden...

I love them, too! Though I probably love hidden *intentional* meanings more.

I have analyzed my ardor for analyzing, and my analysis is also that analyzing away is A-okay. I appreciate your...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-25-2010, 05:39 AM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
I suspected the black spot in your video drawings...

I suspected the black spot in your video drawings wasn't intentionally there to correspond to the word "spot" in the lyrics, since they didn't occur at the same time...but wouldn't it be cool if they...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-25-2010, 04:54 AM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
I like the guitar and instrumentals very much,...

I like the guitar and instrumentals very much, Stone Birds! A couple times I felt your voice was a little out of tune and the overdubbing made it hard to understand your voice.

I feel your...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 10-08-2009, 10:45 AM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hi Stone Birds! It's been a while since I've...

Hi Stone Birds! It's been a while since I've "seen" you here!

One comment: when I imagine a battlefield, I don't imagine anyone waiting. On the *way* to the battlefield, people may be waiting...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-14-2009, 06:23 PM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Remixes

Hi Stone Birds,

I listened to both of your remixes and then the originals, which I'd never heard before, so I could compare them.

I recommend you make the vocals louder for both remixes, if...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-14-2009, 02:39 PM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Ah...rain! I'll have to listen again more...

Ah...rain! I'll have to listen again more carefully and figure out why it didn't sound like rain to me. Now that I know it is rain, I probably will recognize it! Thanks for the info on your...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-13-2009, 11:49 PM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hi, Stone Birds, I downloaded and listened to...

Hi, Stone Birds, I downloaded and listened to your 4 tracks. They all have a very somber quality, I feel, similar to the songs you have posted on your MySpace page.

I particularly listened to...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-06-2009, 05:44 PM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hi, Stone Birds, I like the way you use the...

Hi, Stone Birds,
I like the way you use the theme of family in these lyrics (mother, father, brother, sister, grandpa, grandma) to tie the song together from beginning to end. The "Grandpa gun" is...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 06-19-2009, 11:10 PM
Replies: 138
Views: 15,642
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hi, Stone Birds, I like the strong visual...

Hi, Stone Birds,
I like the strong visual images of nature that you include in this song, which I interpret as describing the road of life we all take and the difficulties/sadness faced while...
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