Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-05-2009, 12:20 PM
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Replies: 33
Views: 4,489
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-14-2009, 07:18 PM
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Replies: 33
Views: 4,489
Hey asshat,
I'll review this song since of...
Hey asshat,
I'll review this song since of course it deals with a topic I feel is especially interesting.
First, subject matter: you deal with the issue of free choice and governmental power...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-03-2009, 08:30 AM
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Replies: 33
Views: 4,489
Hi, asshat,
Your explantation about how the two...
Hi, asshat,
Your explantation about how the two parts of the song fit together makes sense to me. I do feel that the first part of the song, describing how trying to kill yourself feels, does sound...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-26-2009, 11:33 PM
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Replies: 33
Views: 4,489
Hi, asshat,
I especially like the section of...
Hi, asshat,
I especially like the section of the first poem that I've shown in bold because it (amusingly, to me) describes a loner quite well. Have you considered separating the lyrics into two...
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