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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-10-2011, 05:06 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Veggie, I've been meaning to comment on your...

Veggie, I've been meaning to comment on your lyrics for over a month now! It seems like ages since you've been back at MusicBanter.

I'm glad you've been writing many more songs and poems, but I...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-28-2010, 03:38 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Ah, VeggieLover, it sounds like the feeling of...

Ah, VeggieLover, it sounds like the feeling of being jaded has hit you young!

I'll have to try to view your Facebook video. I can never remember my password so have to go look that up. Could...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-02-2010, 04:29 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Oh, good, Veggie...I was afraid I might incense...

Oh, good, Veggie...I was afraid I might incense you again by drawing a parallel between your song and a popular movie! ;)

Hmm...bigger troubles *after* death. You know, I never actually...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-28-2010, 03:06 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Cute song, Veggie! I do feel joking about death...

Cute song, Veggie! I do feel joking about death is actually a good way to make peace with it. So, it is nice to hear a non-serious (but underneath serious) song about death. Your song is also a...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-23-2010, 05:31 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Thanks for the explanation, Veggie. I prefer the...

Thanks for the explanation, Veggie. I prefer the original second verse to the new one. The original ties in the description of autumn and feels more concrete than the option you write above. Plus,...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-18-2010, 02:23 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hi Veggie, Your song describes someone numb...

Hi Veggie,

Your song describes someone numb to the world, unable to acknowledge her own pain (or feel others) and thus unable to appreciate positive emotions about the beauty of nature and life...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-25-2010, 07:06 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Heh heh...I'd just seen New Moon and read all the...

Heh heh...I'd just seen New Moon and read all the Twilight books, so the Jacob wolf image was on my mind when I read your song!



Oh, it is so lovely to hear your voice (though I've heard it...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-21-2010, 12:31 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hey VeggieLover, I agree with AwwSugar that...

Hey VeggieLover,
I agree with AwwSugar that your vivid description of a character shutting herself off from life seems very realistic, due to all the details. The story is also compelling. I want...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-29-2009, 10:40 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hi, VeggieLover, Your fantasy world for Ivy is...

Hi, VeggieLover,
Your fantasy world for Ivy is rich with detail. I especially liked the detail of the vines tracing her muscle (would it be better to say muscles?).

If you wrote "a person"...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-20-2009, 11:23 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hey, VeggieLover, I like your explanation about...

Hey, VeggieLover,
I like your explanation about sin and how it relates to your song. I like your wall of people idea because when dancing, people do become an obstacle physically that can keep you...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-14-2009, 06:49 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hi, VeggieLover, Ah, so that was the bridge! I...

Hi, VeggieLover,
Ah, so that was the bridge! I hadn't been sure, but I decided I liked a longer chorus so included your bridge as part of it. I was reading through your song with the beat in my...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-12-2009, 10:36 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hi, VeggieLover, I'd first like to make sure I...

Hi, VeggieLover,
I'd first like to make sure I understand the meaning behind your song. I see it as describing the pattern living beings follow: pairing off in romantic couples, but also combined...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-05-2009, 12:01 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Yes...the 3rd page of oblivion...scary place,...

Yes...the 3rd page of oblivion...scary place, that. I've been meaning to write more about your poems but as you see am behind, so seeing your VeggieLover thread pop up is a good reminder!

You...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-23-2009, 04:13 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,374
Posted By VEGANGELICA
Hi, VeggieLover! I'm sorry my review arrives...

Hi, VeggieLover!

I'm sorry my review arrives so late! This is a busy time of the year for maize geneticists in the MidWest. I've been out in the hot Iowan fields every day this week pollinating...
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