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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 06-03-2011, 12:33 AM
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Posted By VeggieLover
Ok, I'm back... again! This time I'm really going...

Ok, I'm back... again! This time I'm really going to dive in the forum cuz, lets face it, I need some serious help familiarizing myself with the music of the world (which is completely necessary if...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-17-2010, 05:36 PM
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Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
New song... not particularly good, but very...

New song... not particularly good, but very indicative of my mood at the moment, and it will get me back into the MB swing. enjoy!



"Sweet Sixteen"

Tired, tired tired, tired sixteen. ...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-02-2010, 07:46 AM
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Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
Do not dismay Vegangelica! This time your...

Do not dismay Vegangelica! This time your connection with popular lit. is correct, I was indeed refering to the sorcerer's stone from the first book, which is supposed to give the holder eternal...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-27-2010, 01:09 PM
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Posted By VeggieLover
New song! It's still pretty rough, but here it...

New song! It's still pretty rough, but here it is. Despite the seriousness of topic, the chords ( G and Am something something mostly) are rather upbeat, and the lyrics a little bit humorous (all...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-27-2010, 12:42 PM
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Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
I actually wrote the verse with "the race we've...

I actually wrote the verse with "the race we've got to run" before i wrote the one about pain, but I agree with you that the one you know as the "original" fits better.

When i was practicing...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-22-2010, 01:55 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
Thanks for replying. The song is more about how...

Thanks for replying. The song is more about how we've become so desensitized (i think that's the word?) to both the beauty and the pain in the world than a specific person learning how to express...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2010, 10:30 PM
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Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
My newest song called "Beauty Burns"... this one...

My newest song called "Beauty Burns"... this one actually has chords and not just plinking! there is a brief Beatles reference...

Beauty Burns
Autumn leaves they whisper
Soft goodbyes,
To the...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-25-2010, 10:45 PM
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Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
Ha ya, i know that my ukulele (her name is Lum...

Ha ya, i know that my ukulele (her name is Lum btw) doesn't sound to swell... I've only had it for what, two weeks now? but thank you, im very proud of the song overall and I've gotten almost...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-25-2010, 05:28 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
I always appreciate your critisism Vegangelica,...

I always appreciate your critisism Vegangelica, but I must say first and foremost that I absoluetly refuse, as an artist and an admirer of the beautiful animals we have almost exterminated from the...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-17-2010, 08:03 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
lol no, he didn't *actually* want to hit me, but...

lol no, he didn't *actually* want to hit me, but he *did* forcibly remove the ukulele from his general vicinity :(
I took the uke to youth group tonight and it was a big hit, but sadly, no one...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-17-2010, 03:49 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
im working on it, but idk how to do the whole...

im working on it, but idk how to do the whole youtube thing. Also, i barely know any ukulele so the "chords" are very very very VERY simple. My brother just about punched my face in listening to it...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-17-2010, 12:06 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
New song!!!!!!!

I just got a ukulele and can finally put music to my lyrics. I'm finding it's also a lot easier to make up lyrics when there is already music as well. I've already put the rainbow one from the very...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-01-2009, 04:20 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
ha, it was weird to see my thread on the first...

ha, it was weird to see my thread on the first page again... thanks for reading, Cold is my favorite too. Unfortunitely my creativity is being stifled by the amount of time i spend on school work so...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-22-2009, 06:47 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
oh, there it is! fixed! i changed "screaming" to...

oh, there it is! fixed! i changed "screaming" to unruly and the second sagged to "hung loosely" though, that might change again later cuz i dont like it quite right. thx.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-22-2009, 06:27 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
hmm, screaming children was supposed to give an...

hmm, screaming children was supposed to give an image of the neighborhood kids playing under the window...screaming. Perhaps it is the wrong word choice, would you have a better suggestion?
...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-22-2009, 04:57 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
Heeey. This isn't a poem or song (again!) but I...

Heeey. This isn't a poem or song (again!) but I haven't been writing a lot lately. Sorry!
But, this is a word sketch I did a long time ago, with a little revision, that I'd like some feedback on. ...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-14-2009, 05:41 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
oh no worries, music banter is an awsome and...

oh no worries, music banter is an awsome and unexpected resource for me, I won't be leaving anytime soon, though probably i will start spending a little less time here considering the fact that i...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-11-2009, 07:24 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
*sigh* one of my real life friends just joined...

*sigh* one of my real life friends just joined and now im embarressed about this entire thread :$ oh well, there goes my cyber world anomnity. :) its k though, cuz he's awsome. Methinks you all...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-09-2009, 04:53 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
Thanks. Its my most sentimental poem by far. ...

Thanks. Its my most sentimental poem by far. Its good to know that I at least have a grain-of-sand bit of talent for communicating emotions. I appreciate u taking the time to read.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-04-2009, 05:19 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
You see! this is why she needs a different name. ...

You see! this is why she needs a different name. I can't work with a character everyone already thinks they know.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-30-2009, 11:06 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
thanks for your comments, now that i re-read, i...

thanks for your comments, now that i re-read, i agree with you on the whole "man" thing...though nymphs are infamous for their seductive powers, men are not neccessarily the only ones subject.
...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-28-2009, 02:17 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
Not a song, but pls read neway

This is just a short little word sketch i wrote, if u've got the time, id appreciate feedback. Also, if you can think of a better name then Ivy, id appreciate it.
...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-20-2009, 02:45 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
Yes, i do think i will leave Grand Jete out and...

Yes, i do think i will leave Grand Jete out and find something else to catch the attention. As i was writing the song i kept having those images of the ballroom dances where everyone is in perfect...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-15-2009, 01:29 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
That question can be included in the meaning of...

That question can be included in the meaning of the line. A lot of the conservative fundamentalists that I've observed seem to live life the way they were taught to live it...ie. the steps of the...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-12-2009, 02:00 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 6,371
Posted By VeggieLover
yes, you got the meaning behind the song. "rats...

yes, you got the meaning behind the song. "rats and cats" are also common lab animals... I kind of meant for the song to make us think about the things we do everyday. Like a rat in a maze or a cat...
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