Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
10-12-2009, 01:46 PM
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there's varying critiques i have about your...
there's varying critiques i have about your lyrics;
they're not succinct, many seem tautological. this means you're being verbose for no real reason. use only what you need to use, not just what...
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