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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-04-2008, 11:12 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
I like the subject matter quite a bit and how the...

I like the subject matter quite a bit and how the refrain in the first three stanzas goes hand in hand with being unsure about existence.
The last two lines are a great release and seem almost like...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-12-2007, 10:09 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
This is fun, good work.

This is fun, good work.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 10-17-2007, 08:00 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
This is good.

This is good.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-11-2007, 10:55 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
Both can be just as good.

Both can be just as good.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-11-2007, 10:00 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
I'm sorry that I regard that as a completely...

I'm sorry that I regard that as a completely immature response with no sense of thought backing it whatsoever.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-11-2007, 12:57 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
No, you're just an idiot.

No, you're just an idiot.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-10-2007, 11:10 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
Just because you're too ****ing retarded to use...

Just because you're too ****ing retarded to use your mind outside of an obligatory governmental juicing process doesn't mean that Crowe's poem is now devoid of all value.

His ability shows much...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-10-2007, 03:24 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
It was alright.

It was alright.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2007, 10:01 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
Yeah definitely, this would be a much better song...

Yeah definitely, this would be a much better song than just a written poem, it was far too simple to be a thought-provoking poem like your more lengthy ones.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2007, 01:37 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
Very interesting subject matter. Again, I still...

Very interesting subject matter.
Again, I still don't think you need to use commas in those long stanzas.
This would make a good song.

I liked it a lot.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-10-2007, 01:33 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
Then is not necessary. I liked it for the...

Then is not necessary.

I liked it for the most part, but it's disappointing; it's not one of your best works, and the subject matter is extremely resolute.
Maybe you understand where I'm coming...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-31-2006, 01:15 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
Ryan, you piss excellence. New song of the...

Ryan, you piss excellence.
New song of the month nomination!
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-08-2006, 11:12 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
That's a great piece you wrote there.

That's a great piece you wrote there.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-19-2006, 03:56 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
Crowe my friend really liked your poem. He says...

Crowe my friend really liked your poem.
He says you're a sex god.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 10-14-2006, 09:53 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
It's pretty good, not as good as "The Warmth in...

It's pretty good, not as good as "The Warmth in Those Dying Years" but still good.
It has a different tone to it too, I like it.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-03-2006, 12:27 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
This would be cool. CodyFinck, I know you're...

This would be cool.
CodyFinck, I know you're new, so I won't say no one was thinking of doing that.
;)
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-17-2006, 04:33 PM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
Wow man, you should keep your brother away from...

Wow man, you should keep your brother away from him.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-11-2006, 11:07 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
You're welcome Lolz, that's why I love that...

You're welcome
Lolz, that's why I love that Fall of Troy song, I always think of that crazy cross-dresser.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-11-2006, 11:03 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
That was awesome. The rhythm in that poem...

That was awesome.

The rhythm in that poem was so flowing, it rolled off the tongue and brought the actions together in such a stylish way.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-04-2006, 01:58 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,346
Posted By Trauma
That's going to be a pretty dramatic chord...

That's going to be a pretty dramatic chord progression if Crowe uses that, especially the chorus, the Bm is perfect, I can feel it in the words.

I loved the lyrics for that song, that part "She...
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