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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-10-2006, 10:02 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
Well we all have different strong points and for...

Well we all have different strong points and for me it's harder to connect with my emotions in a song.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-07-2006, 11:40 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
I want to be as good as you. I want to be...

I want to be as good as you.

I want to be able to touch peoples emotions in songs without seeming oversensitive.

****, lets have a talent transplant.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-06-2006, 04:50 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
That's.... *feels camp*....beautiful.......

That's.... *feels camp*....beautiful.... seriously....woah... it touches on so many thing... at first I thought it was just going to be a really good song about young love, but you changed direction...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-28-2006, 01:25 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
I think that while the rest of the song had real...

I think that while the rest of the song had real emotion to it, that verse never. I was hoping that in that verse you would be able to connect with Lyndsay's pain, but unfortunately that never...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-28-2006, 01:20 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
Please don't kill me, but I don't really like...

Please don't kill me, but I don't really like that verse. It is the weakest one out of the lot IMO. I know I'm just being awkward, but my reaction would be to change it.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-21-2006, 04:32 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
I think that you may need to spend some time on...

I think that you may need to spend some time on creating another verse about what I posted before. I can't believe you missed that verse out-with your lyrical abilities, it could be the most powerful...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-19-2006, 11:26 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
Then you must want to kill this kid.

Then you must want to kill this kid.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-19-2006, 11:11 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
That's brilliant and you've obviously taken a lot...

That's brilliant and you've obviously taken a lot of time to write it. Very powerful, although I think the part where she was thrown out by her parents could have had its own verse. This is a...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-30-2005, 10:09 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
I'm so pleased with myself!

I'm so pleased with myself!
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-30-2005, 08:34 AM
Replies: 406
Views: 71,352
Posted By TrampInaTux
I really liked that. In fact, I loved that....

I really liked that. In fact, I loved that. Absolutely brilliant. I'm glad that there is finally as guy to prove Big3's comment wrong, that there is some hope for n00bs to this forum. I give you my...
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