Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
04-12-2006, 05:55 AM
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Thank you
for feedback. Have made the correction on 'like a white lie'. The until all night was to give a kind of sense of timelessness. Your comments are much appreciated. I will put another one up soon if...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
04-11-2006, 11:09 AM
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Replies: 3
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Lunatic
And so she stole a battered car and drove until all night,
You finished by a lakeside you were naked like a white lie,
And you thought you were a star 'cos you had movies on your mind,
You were...
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