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Old 05-18-2024, 07:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Post Hi, I'm Elliott! Here's some lyrics I wrote tonight

My name is Elliott, I'm a teenager from Australia and I love to write and record songs. This is my first post so here is a new song I wrote tonight called "Break Your Mind With Internet Blogs!"

It's about comparing a relationship to old internet forums. Hopefully not in a cringey way. I hope you like it, I will post more in time I think.

Break Your Mind With Internet Blogs!

You’ve spent all nights on internet forums
Surely you knew that it was over for you
Live your life like it’s two thousand and seven
Even though you know that you were barely around
And so I take to the homepage
Every little icon is beaming out to my eyes
Click on all I see out of pure rage
For instant gratification of everything that’s part of my mind

Break your mind with old-fashioned internet blogs
I’ll ease my mind with another poor-written log

You wake up early just to see my interactions
You know I’m praying just to get to where you’re acting
Is so wonderful, oh, it’s the place to be
With lovely scenery for you and me
But, once again, it’s just another built up façade
Of broken web-links, can’t be clicked, I’m sat in my yard
Looking up at the moon in all of its sadness
Writing a post about how you’ve driven me to madness

Break your mind with old-fashioned internet blogs!
I’ll ease my mind with another poor-written log!
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