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10-14-2005, 12:03 PM
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Account Disabled
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: leeds-uk
Posts: 30
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rate my lyrics
Dream of United Kingdom
Dream of United Kingdom The place dreams that are crushed Mind are turned to ****ing slush Dream of United Kingdom Dream of United Kingdom Where hell is born to create chaos The chaos, which will kill us all Dream of United Kingdom Dream of United Kingdom People sleep all the freaking time There’s never any good wine Dream of United Kingdom Dream of United Kingdom The place I hate so damn much Full of retarded rules and such Dream of United Kingdom ok then rate my lyrics, my sis liked them. er i sorta based this on my experience. k laters, peace. |
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10-14-2005, 12:10 PM
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Bright F*cking Red
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: San Diego
Posts: 2,222
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its....ok, i guess. its quite repetative though.....
and its in the wrong forum. we have another forum.....for stuff like this......its called.......SONG WRITING. use it 
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11-08-2005, 11:19 AM
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Traveler Of Time & Space
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: I'm the bustle in your hedgegrow
Posts: 628
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i give it a generous .5
although nowadays i wouldnt doubt that that song would make it to the top it kinda sounds like somethin that you would hear out of linkin park or some ****ty band like that
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11-11-2005, 03:59 AM
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your mum thinks im cool
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Adelaide, SA
Posts: 26
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what's so bad about the UK?
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11-11-2005, 05:16 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: England
Posts: 507
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They do not have the threshold to be witty and therefore resort to calling the place retarded whilst throwing in a reference to booze and a swearword. The cretin feels it's job is done and then proceeds to ask their sister if it resembles loosely something the Sex Pistols would write. The sister, shaken by hearing 'the tru wrd of pun7k' unknowingly encourages the true idiocy of the eager green day fan, aspiring to fill billy joe's eyeliner-laden eyes with adoration. Et Viola.
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11-11-2005, 09:05 PM
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Hippie killer
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Anaheim, California
Posts: 71
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I agree with ladyluckrules and I give this crap a 0 out of 1 million. Your **** the UK song is really uninspired, leave the UK bashing to Conflict.
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