The pain i hide inside (rock, cover, quote, band)

BabyGurl928 · 10-30-2005, 01:15 AM

You were my hero, always doing right
people would judge you
and i would jump to your side
but then we had to separate, tore me apart
each time you came to visit, was filled with joy
oh, but you had to go away, tried to make you stay
but you let go of me over & over again

If you could look into my eyes
you would see the pain i hide inside
cuz you werent here
to take away my fear

(Chorus)
Whyyyyyyyyyyyy
..........
I sighhhhhhhhhhh
..........
I'll cryyyyyyyyyyy
..........
Tonnnnightttttt
And forever more
Forever more

You decided to move in with us,
we all thought it was the right thing to do
missed out on the older ones lives
How about mine and the little ones
slowly, i started to realise some flaws about you
you started to say and do things
i know my hero would never do
you crushed a part of all of us mentally
what made you so damn cruel

If you could look in my eyes
you would see th pain i hide inside
cuz you are here
and you're just adding to my fears

(Chorus)

You decided we werent good enough{or something}
And up and left one fickal day
knew it was coming, but hell, didnt know it would go that way
i still question why to this day
you left a hole in our hearts, hope you're happy daddy
of course, now we talk to you, but it aint never gonna to be the same
again you've let go of me, when i needed you the most
now you're always telling me that you think i dont love you
need to realize i do, but i let you go from being my hero

If you could look into my eyes
You would see the pain i hide inside
cuz you'll never be here
to shove away my fears

(Chorus)
[chorus repeated & fading away]

riseagainstrocks · 10-30-2005, 07:24 AM

I'm sure this has some deep meaning for you about some boyfriend or something, but this is one of the worst songs i have read in a long time.

The chorus. wow. change. i don't know what to but do.

and how can a day be fickal? is that even how you spell fickal? I DON'T KNOW!

inside_out · 10-30-2005, 07:44 AM

^ I think it's about her Dad...

But apart from that I agree with you.

riseagainstrocks · 10-30-2005, 08:08 AM

isn't a reason to write bad songs.

inside_out · 10-30-2005, 08:53 AM

So true..

marshmallowmonkey · 10-30-2005, 09:00 AM

i thikn it is quite a personal song

so i guess anyone who hasnt been there, where ever that is, wouldnt get it

im not getting at risegainstrocks or insideout because personally i dont like it either, but i like to cover my ass

TheBig3 · 10-30-2005, 09:20 AM

The problem with deeply personal is it only makes sense to you. Songs are inherently for entertainment purposes. If your not writing it to entertain people, get a journal.

marshmallowmonkey · 10-30-2005, 09:37 AM

thats a good point, i wrote a song that was very personal to me and everyone thought i was insane.

i want a sugar skull!!!

TheBig3 · 10-30-2005, 03:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by marshmallowmonkey

thats a good point, i wrote a song that was very personal to me and everyone thought i was insane.

i want a sugar skull!!!

I know, I superimposed the tone of that statement into Johnny, but still its the funniest thing he's written.

madeinNY · 11-12-2005, 09:17 PM

BabyGurl, question, who is the song about? Boyfriend? Ex-husband? Father?...

10-30-2005, 01:15 AM	#1 (permalink)
BabyGurl928 ghettochik Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 80	The pain i hide inside You were my hero, always doing right people would judge you and i would jump to your side but then we had to separate, tore me apart each time you came to visit, was filled with joy oh, but you had to go away, tried to make you stay but you let go of me over & over again If you could look into my eyes you would see the pain i hide inside cuz you werent here to take away my fear (Chorus) Whyyyyyyyyyyyy .......... I sighhhhhhhhhhh .......... I'll cryyyyyyyyyyy .......... Tonnnnightttttt And forever more Forever more You decided to move in with us, we all thought it was the right thing to do missed out on the older ones lives How about mine and the little ones slowly, i started to realise some flaws about you you started to say and do things i know my hero would never do you crushed a part of all of us mentally what made you so damn cruel If you could look in my eyes you would see th pain i hide inside cuz you are here and you're just adding to my fears (Chorus) You decided we werent good enough{or something} And up and left one fickal day knew it was coming, but hell, didnt know it would go that way i still question why to this day you left a hole in our hearts, hope you're happy daddy of course, now we talk to you, but it aint never gonna to be the same again you've let go of me, when i needed you the most now you're always telling me that you think i dont love you need to realize i do, but i let you go from being my hero If you could look into my eyes You would see the pain i hide inside cuz you'll never be here to shove away my fears (Chorus) [chorus repeated & fading away]

10-30-2005, 07:24 AM	#2 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	I'm sure this has some deep meaning for you about some boyfriend or something, but this is one of the worst songs i have read in a long time. The chorus. wow. change. i don't know what to but do. and how can a day be fickal? is that even how you spell fickal? I DON'T KNOW! __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

10-30-2005, 07:44 AM	#3 (permalink)
inside_out Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 70	^ I think it's about her Dad... But apart from that I agree with you. __________________ "After silence, that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music."

10-30-2005, 08:08 AM	#4 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	isn't a reason to write bad songs. __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

10-30-2005, 08:53 AM	#5 (permalink)
inside_out Music Addict Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 70	So true.. __________________ "After silence, that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music."

10-30-2005, 09:00 AM	#6 (permalink)
marshmallowmonkey i am the cookie monster Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: in the middle of ****ing nowhere Posts: 122	i thikn it is quite a personal song so i guess anyone who hasnt been there, where ever that is, wouldnt get it im not getting at risegainstrocks or insideout because personally i dont like it either, but i like to cover my ass __________________ i don't wanna come back down from this cloud

10-30-2005, 09:20 AM	#7 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	The problem with deeply personal is it only makes sense to you. Songs are inherently for entertainment purposes. If your not writing it to entertain people, get a journal. __________________ I've moved to a new address

10-30-2005, 09:37 AM	#8 (permalink)
marshmallowmonkey i am the cookie monster Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: in the middle of ****ing nowhere Posts: 122	thats a good point, i wrote a song that was very personal to me and everyone thought i was insane. i want a sugar skull!!! __________________ i don't wanna come back down from this cloud

11-12-2005, 09:17 PM	#10 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	BabyGurl, question, who is the song about? Boyfriend? Ex-husband? Father?... __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol