help. (lyrics, band, emo)

justfalldown · 11-15-2005, 06:53 AM

how can you put down meaningful lyrics without sounding like a whining emo kid?

riseagainstrocks · 11-15-2005, 07:51 AM

don't talk about cutting or dying.

real easy.

I write emotionaly without being cliche or overly dramtic. it really isn't that hard.

justfalldown · 11-15-2005, 07:58 AM

i dont really write about cutting, thats just retarded.
dying, erm. optional.
i feel it can help.
but all my band lyrics seem really puffyfied.

riseagainstrocks · 11-15-2005, 08:04 AM

Look at some of my post that involve lyrics. I write in a very free verse style and you might not want to do that, but hopefully it will give you an idea on hwo to balance wordplay with emotion.

the rest is up to you.

justfalldown · 11-22-2005, 06:46 AM

thanks man.

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riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	don't talk about cutting or dying. real easy. I write emotionaly without being cliche or overly dramtic. it really isn't that hard. __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

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justfalldown Groupie Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: england Posts: 11	i dont really write about cutting, thats just retarded. dying, erm. optional. i feel it can help. but all my band lyrics seem really puffyfied. __________________ .smiles.and.her.laughter.

11-15-2005, 08:04 AM	#4 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	Look at some of my post that involve lyrics. I write in a very free verse style and you might not want to do that, but hopefully it will give you an idea on hwo to balance wordplay with emotion. the rest is up to you. __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

11-22-2005, 06:46 AM	#5 (permalink)
justfalldown Groupie Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: england Posts: 11	thanks man. __________________ .smiles.and.her.laughter.